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allan Senior Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 620On the road 
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i imagine a forest like dream huge deep emerald greens scarlet birds and butterflies rise up at my presence wild foaming streams pound cool water on my head shiny wet green plants everywhere whisper in the wind i imagine a volcano spurting pure crimson to the sky wild rivers of heat rumble to the sea and the air is alive with power i imagine the city world of mega highways grey dust landscapes of whirring engines all going precisely nowhere batteries running on empty dollar signs in every eye i imagine the cool serenity of deep space the slow eternal motion of the stars and i wake up thirteen and a dreamer of visions lost in dreams and visions now as then dreaming of a life much better of dreams soaring and stardust drifting down to me here on reality's floorboards still hoping for magic buried in our everyday lives as we wander the world |
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shira Member
since 2000-12-12
Posts 88Hamburg, PA |
This is a real thought-inspiring poem, I think, and I like the progression from a deep forest all the way to deep space... kind of "evolutionary" in a way. But all the same, thoughts in the mind of a child. Very interesting, very nice. |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
interesting how the dreams may change but, never the dreamer. the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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Swamp¤Faeryie Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 393fairyland....of course;) |
very very beautiful,i'm a great admirer of nature,and it's cosmic aspects,this poem spoke to me,wonderful!! swampius maximus "Though thy crest be shorn and shaven,thou "i said" art sure no craven." Ghastly grim and ancient raven,wandering from the nightly shore,tell me what |
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allan Senior Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 620On the road |
Thanks both! Nice to see you here again Swampie!!!  |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
keep imagining and dreaming such wonderful and beautiful thoughts...oh yes and be sure to share them with us. loved the poem "an afixiation a fix on anything the line of life the limb of a tree the hands of he and the promise that s/he is blessed among women". Patti Smith |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
woooooo really inspiring indeed, allan! hmmmm if oni i could write somethin lidat..... love, michelle If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™ |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
For thos who can "see" there's magic all around.  Loved this poem ! |
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