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Broken_Winged_Angel Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 994Small Town, Somewhere 
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Broken heater Broken dreams Frozen water pipes I could scream Sub-zero tempatures Frozen toes Colder cheeks Where's my nose? Cold outside is Warmer than in me Haunted eyes No longer see Tear drops fall Or is it rain Memories crashing Through my brain Blizzards coming Here's the storm Need someone to hold To keep me warm Lightening flashes Through the night Laughing faces Fill my sight Despair consumes No where to turn Light this fire Watch me burn  < !signature--> With a little piece of tomorrow, You'll have to kiss yesterday goodbye. Because today won't last forever, And the past will only make you cry. [This message has been edited by Broken_Winged_Angel (edited 12-12-2000).] |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
Wherever this came from, I'm glad you posted it here. It's terrific! Interesting how, when things go wrong, everything else seems to crowd in on you, too. Real feelings here, and I like the way you expressed them. To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
KCS posted my reply..lol..I'll just say this was great!  the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
BWA, some deep feelings you have expressed here and very well love the format! Maree "If my words could blanket the skies and fill every corner and crevice of this earth, still this wouldn't be enough" "Maree Russo" |
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shira Member
since 2000-12-12
Posts 88Hamburg, PA |
This is a wonderful display of emotion, and I can really relate to it right now, I love the way you have presented this. Good work. -Shira. |
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blackhalo Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 467Denver, CO |
BWA, Very nice work. Emotions expressed so well, yet nonchalantly. As is always done in good poetry. Alicia |
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Wobbly Head Bob Member
since 2000-05-15
Posts 299Virginia, USA |
B_W_A--->Excellent work! "where's my nose" I hate it when its that cold. I think I know where this came from but I'm not tellin'! Thanks for the read! |
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Suzanne Arlene Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 377Ontario, Canada |
That is a GREAT poem very well written neat format and said it all from your heart. Now that was good Pat yourself on the back Job well done Suzanne |
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raleighbttrfly Member
since 2000-11-21
Posts 160Raleigh NC |
I hate the cold to, and I know what you mean by being colder inside. The shape you gave this pome add somuch. Once agine grate work, I truly love your poetry. I am not always lonely even if I am always alone |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
You surely have a gift for expressing your true feelings in a beautifully unique way. athe analogy was perfect. I hope this time passes and joy soon will fill your poems. ellie Belief is a truth held in the mind; faith is a fire in the heart. Joseph Fort Newton |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I LOVE IT "If you live to be a hundred, I want to live to be a hundred minus one day, so I never have to live without you." Winnie the Pooh |
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Broken_Winged_Angel Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 994Small Town, Somewhere |
Thanks to all of you!!! I'm always suprised here. The poems I post that I think are the worst get the most responses.. Guess I shouldn't judge my own writing. Thankyou again. |
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