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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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 Be A Star~*Marge Tindal*~ Be who you want to beBe who you are Be a diamond Be a starLight up the night In the heart of your delightMight get it right Be a starBe a diamond Be who you are Be who you want to be~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
very nice, Marge..  the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah, Disney, Tinkerbelle...all good dreams to come true...when you wish upon a star, makes no matter who you are... Love you Marge! Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
Marge, I love the thoughts in this, and have just sent it to my daughter, an aspiring actress. I like the use of chiasm in this, too. You amaze me with the constant new ways of doing things you come up with.To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Pegasus~ Thanks so very much for the read. Karilea~ Yeah ! Love ya' too ! KCS~ THANK YOU so much for mentioning that. The first two verses fell so naturally to the page and then I played with it to achieve the effect of the intersecting to give it that chiasmatic effect ! I'm just so pleased to know that someone else thought it was worth the effort. You just made my day ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Marge; you shine through out this lovely poem. I love the theme of self acceptance. Belief is a truth held in the mind; faith is a fire in the heart. Joseph Fort Newton |
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Broken_Winged_Angel Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 994Small Town, Somewhere |
Such support... Whoever has you in their lives are very lucky people Marge. Your personality shows through with the things that you write.  Very good poem. |
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DawnG
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
Marge, Great poem. I'd be surprised if I don't see this as an e card in my mailbox in the next few days. A very good friend, actually two of them from Corner Pub are always telling me this. Thank you also for all your encouragement of my writings.Dawn |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Marge your a star  Life has got to chnage, Nothing stays the same, Soon it will be time, For me to move on. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Beautiful, I just want to be a poet!!!!!!! "If you live to be a hundred, I want to live to be a hundred minus one day, so I never have to live without you." Winnie the Pooh |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Ellie~ I am caught in a meteor shower of stars ! Such friends who shine - cannot keep their light hidden. BrokenWingedAngel~ Then count yourself kissed with a lot of luck, gal ! Callie~ And you CAN be a star to light the way for others. Maria~ I can only sparkle as a reflection of the light of those around me. Kathleen~ Poof ! *Thank you ALL ... you make it such fun to be a poet ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
you are one of the sparkling reasons why i am soooo enjoying my time here... write on..surprise me more  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kaile~ Awwwwwwwwww ! You made my morning sparkle ! Thank you, darling friend. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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raleighbttrfly Member
since 2000-11-21
Posts 160Raleigh NC |
This was so well put. I hope I will one day shine like this. Loved the read thank you. I am not always lonely even if I am always alone |
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bestgirl911 Senior Member
since 2000-10-04
Posts 551Clio, MI , United We Stand |
Marge.... You are such a wonderous star...you light up our hearts with your gift. Best |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Marge~ Excellent reminder to us all. We can be anything we want to be if we set our minds on it and work hard. LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
RaleighBttrfly~ Thank you. Reach for that star and BE IT ! BestGirl~ Awwwww ! Thanks, hon. LoneWolf~ AMEN, my friend. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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