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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa 
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Oh lovely flower, wild and free, have you fled and abandoned me? windswept plains do chill the bone, this poet grieves for you alone, soon winter comes to stalk the land, white blankets fall at his command, your dormant seed in darkest sleep, strong winter coat the life does keep, until soft rains your limbs unfold, your gentle face these eyes behold, the beauty of my love’s repose, sweeter than the garden rose, I wait in silence for that time, oh sweetest object of my rhyme. the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Each couplet a glorious gem. Your analogies are superb. I enjoyed reading this more than once. You are truly a gifted poet! Ellie Belief is a truth held in the mind; faith is a fire in the heart. Joseph Fort Newton |
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Swamp¤Faeryie Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 393fairyland....of course;) |
absolutely completely totally beautiful!!!!!!!!!!!! "Though thy crest be shorn and shaven,thou "i said" art sure no craven." Ghastly grim and ancient raven,wandering from the nightly shore,tell me what |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
Happy wildflower to be the object of such a rhyme! This is extremely well done.  To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Ahhhh...beautiful Pegasus, great poem. |
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Poertree Senior Member
since 1999-11-05
Posts 1359UK |
wow ...this is coincidental! i just read a 7 couplet (some kind of sonnet...lol?)poem by a new member called Wildflower and now this .. a poem in identical format with the title Wildflower Lost ... by you! and this poem is just as beautiful as the other .. very gentle very evocative philip and btw i haven't forgotten i still owe you a reply on your other poem !! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Pegasus, this is beautiful...and carried me along all of the way... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Pegasus~ How very, very enjoyable. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Hi Pegasus A very beautiful poem indeed, flowed so beautifully especially loved this..... windswept plains do chill the bone, this poet grieves for you alone, Maree "If my words could blanket the skies and fill every corner and crevice of this earth, still this wouldn't be enough" "Maree Russo" |
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dena*mystrawberries Junior Member
since 2000-10-15
Posts 15 |
pegasus, you sure know how to make someone miss love...your poem is beautiful... |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
thanks to all for the read..this piece is one of 5 in the wildflower series. I'm glad you enjoyed it. the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I will read them all, I love wildflowers! "Always be a first rate version of your self instead of a second rate version of someone else." Marilyn Monroe |
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Broken_Winged_Angel Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 994Small Town, Somewhere |
Pegasus... Such sweet words. I'll have to read the rest of them.  Really enjoyed reading this. |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
In spring she will re appear... beautifully penned... I see that you are poet in full bloom. "an afixiation a fix on anything the line of life the limb of a tree the hands of he and the promise that s/he is blessed among women". Patti Smith |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Hey this was good i'm looking out for the rest Life has got to chnage, Nothing stays the same, Soon it will be time, For me to move on. |
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wordancer Senior Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 809VA |
...sometimes, in a magical garden, a wildflower will bloom out of season...reaching for the warmth of love... -so says the dancer of words "Come...dance with me, in my world of words." |
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kindasorta Member
since 2000-12-02
Posts 56 |
Oh my dear fickle poet friend how your mind does whirl and spend. When two steps back I read your read how then you called this flower a weed. Love and hate conveying ambigious needs which one yeilds to those your needs? |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
hello, kindasorta....so, you noticed the paradox...lol...good..glad to see someone is on their toes..I could explain but, that would remove the mystery for you and the fun for me... the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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