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Broken_Winged_Angel
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since 2000-04-06
Posts 994
Small Town, Somewhere

0 posted 2000-12-08 08:07 AM


Broken spirit caged
Flightless bird lost
Amid all the lies
Freedom has a cost

Clipped wings bind
Staying on the ground
Poor bird trys to fly
Can't become air bound

Mournfully he sings
As others soar above
Tethered eagle cries
For what his kind loves

Tail feathers dragging
His head bowed low
Freedoms found at last
When his spirit lets go.

With a little piece of tomorrow,
You'll have to kiss yesterday goodbye.
Because today won't last forever,
And the past will only make you cry.

© Copyright 2000 Angel - All Rights Reserved
pegasus111
Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219
ocala, fl, usa
1 posted 2000-12-08 08:42 AM


freedom lost is living death..well said Angel.

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost


Songbird
Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184
Missouri
2 posted 2000-12-08 03:40 PM


Your poems have a mystery about them, I am sure you have a story to tell. One thing for sure there is what thing a cage can never do and that is take away your song however sad it may be. Keep singing! I am a birdlover as you can tell.
Wobbly Head Bob
Member
since 2000-05-15
Posts 299
Virginia, USA
3 posted 2000-12-08 03:44 PM


I wrote one kinda like this, following that same thing.  Its how I feel sometimes, watching everyone else doing what I want to do, but I can't do those things...tied down, and bound, I don't know why.  This is a great piece, though, makes mine look dull and unfinished, I'm not worthy!  *L*
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