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Wobbly Head Bob
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since 2000-05-15
Posts 299
Virginia, USA

0 posted 2000-12-07 03:40 PM


Who are you
Casting all away
through eyes that cannot see
All I do
Drifting with the currents
of the souls in me

Stay with me
Searching for the ends
of something Death's gone by
All will be
Questioned of the moonlight
in a starless sky

Temporary visions all
Thats made of life

A swipe across the board
with the rusted knife

When a summer sunset
Lays its head down last
Winds will cross the valley
Leave a breath into the past

Who am I
Looking for the answers
Lacking all the clues
Days gone by
Waiting by the shadows
of the darker truths

Don't you fear
Awake and still you're sleeping
creep across the night
I'll be here
Holding onto to dreamscapes
on the edge of light

© Copyright 2000 Wobbly Head Bob - All Rights Reserved
pegasus111
Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219
ocala, fl, usa
1 posted 2000-12-07 05:46 PM


When a summer sunset
Lays its head down last
Winds will cross the valley
Leave a breath into the past


that's really beautiful..nice piece.I like

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost


Marge Tindal
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since 1999-11-06
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Florida's Foreverly Shores
2 posted 2000-12-08 07:52 AM


Bob~
This is a quite a formidable piece.
I'm taken with -

'All will be
Questioned of the moonlight
in a starless sky'


Glad you shared this - and glad you're back in style.
~*Marge*~



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Broken_Winged_Angel
Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 994
Small Town, Somewhere
3 posted 2000-12-08 07:55 AM


Very good read!  I'm bookmarking it to read again.  
Wobbly Head Bob
Member
since 2000-05-15
Posts 299
Virginia, USA
4 posted 2000-12-08 11:13 AM


Thank you all, very much for reading and posting!  Glad you've enjoyed this, I've missed being able to share and I'm so glad to be doing it again!
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