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DawnG 
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States 
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What Does Your House Look Like? Different yet alike, That's what I am, Why can't I be like you? Why can't I be in your shoes? What does your house look like? What color is your bike? I want to see my friends, Talk to them on the phone is all I can do. Sometimes I just want to be WITH you. I want to be able to go Christmas shopping or open a jar, Without having someone come from afar, To help me. I get so mad at the world, I want to be able to go visit my friends, my family, Not have them have to come to me all the time. [This message has been edited by Callie (edited 12-06-2000).] |
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Little_Spyro Senior Member
since 2000-01-09
Posts 659San Diego, CA, USA |
Yes, I know the feeling...  I've had the same experience a few times in my short life, and it's not very fun--but then again, I've been a lot of places and seen a lot of things...and I wonder, What would it be like if I were them?Great poem, Dawn! Keep pumping 'em out!!  Little Spyro T. Dragon Watching the poets Passions' guardian dragon Moves with the rhymes' flow. Though my body be Human, my heart and soul be That of a dragon. |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
nice effort Dawn..but, be careful what you wish for..  the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Desr Dawn; Lovely writing, my friend. But this is the life that you have and God wants to give you peace with it, so acceptance is the only answer. You are such a beautiful heart and alot of that has grown because of yout siuation, so use all that are to grow and be happy. My house is usually messy because I spend too much time at passions! worth every minute of it! maybe the fairies will come and clean it for me! Love, Ellie Belief is a truth held in the mind; faith is a fire in the heart. Joseph Fort Newton |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Dawn, This poem speaks very well of frustrations that I know you have to deal with everyday of your life, but know my friend that coming to visit You is a joy I treasure. |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Dawn, Good to see you writing, whether venting steam or talking about things that are dear, Keep writing from the heart and you can't miss! Your friend, Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has passed Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) |
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Broken_Winged_Angel Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 994Small Town, Somewhere |
Hmm...good to see you venting, and I've often wondered what it would be like to have someone elses life for a bit...but like it was said earlier, be careful what you wish for... "Things aren't always what they seem." |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
Dawn, ooooh... sigh wad a poetic vent..... *huGz* feelin betta? love, michelle If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™ |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
ouch! this tells so much of your frustrations...im not sure as to what to say but life itself is a bliss and perhaps we should always remind ourselves that living is already the greatest joy... HUGS...hope you are feeling better  |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Awww well hey i know how this feels. I'm always moving from place to place and considering i'll be heading off to college soon means that this will be the case for a while. Anyway good poem and hope to read more!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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DawnG
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
Sorry all. I needed to find this poem today and this was the easiest way of making sure I could always find my poetry easily. Put it in my library. |
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