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Wesley the Blue Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 426Forest Lake, MN, USA |
Its -11 degrees farenheit here in duluth, and thats not counting the wind chill. I thought this fitting for the day. Sun without warmth Summers teasing corpse Wind without compasion Winters gasp of death Life here complains Moaning groaning howling Daring the cold sounds unsavory Even my Columbia parka protests Those that dare to venture out Scurry from cover to shelter Hunched and hiding in nylon shells Quivering from the ravenous chill Keith W. Mullin every day is a new day with which we can change the world |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
ok..now that you described what a walking popcycle is like..WHY would anyone LIVE there?....lol..this was a cool(heheh) piece. the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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laryalee Member
since 2000-06-19
Posts 352Alberta, Canada |
Hi Wesley - Here I am, stumbling my way through the forums and discover yet another door! I love this one - sounds very much like our Alberr-rta chill! Very descriptive, very accurate - Excellent! Lary |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
brrrrrrrrrrrrrrr, lovely descriptive poem! Too descriptive, now I have chills...Ellie A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails. |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Can almost feel the cold, you do well  When freedom wisphers your name, it's time to fight for it. |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
Hey! I was just warming up with Peg's carnival scenes, and here you are freezing me again! Very descriptive!  To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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Dawn Eclipse Senior Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 637The Horsehead Nebula |
brrrrr. Glad that's not here.. no wait, it is. lol, oh well. nicely done. "Forget regret, or life is yours to miss. No other course, no other way... No day but today" ~Broadway Musical RENT~ *Cassandra Roseen* |
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Wesley the Blue Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 426Forest Lake, MN, USA |
Thank you all for reading and replying, I hope you are all keeping warm, and to all of those that live in warm climates "I hate you" J/K Keith every day is a new day with which we can change the world |
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