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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

0 posted 2000-12-05 01:37 PM


So give me a reason to shine
and I will give you life
and love and reasons
to live again and
live on in all
of memory
eternity
is yours

and another gift you might
bring to me is snow and
more snow and then
one more crystal
flake so that I
might bright
the world
today

see

I
can
make the
grayest day
shine in the love
of light if you were
to just listen and think
‘why, I can give her snow
if only in a crystal water ball”

I
will  
then do
impossible
and cause lots
of smiles to crease
your face with embrace
of the warm, warm scene
of snow under sunlight beams



Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ




© Copyright 2000 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
pegasus111
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since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219
ocala, fl, usa
1 posted 2000-12-05 03:35 PM


this is gentle and very romantic..

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost


Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla
2 posted 2000-12-05 05:40 PM


Sunshine,
Sun on snow is delightful, *L*.

BSC
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since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919
New York, USA
3 posted 2000-12-05 06:39 PM


Just beautiful Karilea ~ and uh....if you'd like, I'll send you all the flakes you want, as they are falling at record speed here right now.... Bonnie
Sven
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since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA
4 posted 2000-12-05 07:08 PM


snow on order my friend. . . coming your way. . .  

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


raleighbttrfly
Member
since 2000-11-21
Posts 160
Raleigh NC
5 posted 2000-12-05 07:15 PM


I liked the gentle flow of this pome, and I loved the formatt. The shape of the pome adds so much.
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