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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Silver dust will fall, On a wintery meadow, In time for the morn. Life has got to chnage, Nothing stays the same, Soon it will be time, For me to move on. |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Beautifully magical image! Lovely, Maria. Belief is a truth held in the mind; faith is a fire in the heart. Joseph Fort Newton |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
And a very pretty picture it will be, Maria! Thanks for letting me see it. To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Maria~ VERY pretty !  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Maria, Lovely haiku snapshot! You do this well! Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has passed Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
What a cold image you've portrayed for us. BRRRRRRRRrrrrrrrrrrrrr  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
i liked the way you refer snow to silver dust |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Thank u everyone, you all always have lovely comments for me Life has got to chnage, Nothing stays the same, Soon it will be time, For me to move on. |
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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
Maria, nicely done. The beauty of haiku, short-sweet-to the point. Yours is well written. I look forward to reading more. INclan |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
this is so lovely. the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Inclan - thank u, will post more Pegasus - thank u too Life has got to chnage, Nothing stays the same, Soon it will be time, For me to move on. |
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