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blackhalo Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 467Denver, CO |
She’s drunk again He can’t cry For fear of showing Invisible emotions Instead, he smiles He goes on In his normal, Happy routine Yet, he isn’t able To look me in the eyes He fears I might see Invisible emotions I KNOW she hurts him I’ve tired to tell him He doesn’t listen Preoccupied with hiding life He is lost And I don’t know How to recover Invisible emotions |
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DawnG 
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
Alicia, This is very powerful! Those invisible emotions can be just as visable as the outward emotions to the ones we love and whom love us. Dawn |
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Broken_Winged_Angel Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 994Small Town, Somewhere |
Alicia.. All I can really say is "ouch".. This is very powerful and well written. Good job. Me.  |
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