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Romy Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1170Plantation, Florida |
Can you see the brilliant star? Heavens gift, sent to help us Remember the way back Into a way of life we Seem to have forgotten. Too much sadness, greed and pain, but Maybe, if we follow the light, All will be well in the world, Someday… |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
I am impressed! You get the message across beautifully here! To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
WOW! This is so beautifully done and perfectly said! Ellie Belief is a truth held in the mind; faith is a fire in the heart. Joseph Fort Newton |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Debbie~ Without question - LOVELY ! An impressive acrostic with a powerful punch !  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This was great. I liked this one a lot!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Debbie, Beautiful message in a wonderful package! Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has passed Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) |
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Romy Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1170Plantation, Florida |
Thanks to each of you for your kind replies! |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
this is wonderful, Debbie the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
such promise of hope in this piece...perfect for the upcoming festival... i will hope too |
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Romy Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1170Plantation, Florida |
Pegasus111 and Kaile, Thank-you! I'm glad you liked it! |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
No other poem decribes christmas so well Life has got to chnage, Nothing stays the same, Soon it will be time, For me to move on. |
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