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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania 
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To Touch a Dream Deep in farthest reaches of the spirit lies a dream Not wakened yet by moonlit sands or stars mysterious beam It’s in the mind’s unconscious thought, an undiscovered toy It lives within a heartbeat that has yet to skip with joy Not til the spirit opens up to sun’s most piercing rays Can lovely dreams be carved and formed of life’s unmolded clays The beauty of a dream is wrought by love and love returned It waits in silent thought unthought, a page yet to be turned But once unveiled, the vision stays forever in the heart And never from the wanting eye will splendid dreams depart To have and hold and touch a dream is joy within itself For fantasy brings inspiration’s pocket full of wealth From inspiration comes the words to write a poem like this A poem can touch somebody’s heart, though born of just a wish Elizabeth Santos |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Oh Elizabeth, this is really beautiful dear  and how true is this..... From inspiration comes the words to write a poem like this A poem can touch somebody’s heart, though born of just a wish Loved it Maree "If my words could blanket the skies and fill every corner and crevice of this earth, still this won't be enough" "Maree Russo" |
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Broken_Winged_Angel Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 994Small Town, Somewhere |
Elizabeth, you always write such beautiful poetry...This one is stunning. Great job again..  |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
"a page yet to be turned" That is kind of how I look at dreams, great work as always Elizabeth! "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
this certainly touched my heart, Elizabeth..nicely done. the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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bestgirl911 Senior Member
since 2000-10-04
Posts 551Clio, MI , United We Stand |
Just how a poet wishes to touch someone with their words....you expressed it wonderfully. Best |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
The beauty of a dream is wrought by love and love returned It waits in silent thought unthought, a page yet to be turned These are my favorite lines, but I really like all of this beautifully written poem. I am adding it to my library. To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Liz; Beautiful, flowing and unfolding to the dream you write of, capturing the reader and entwining reader and poet in this dream of a poem. Love, Ellie Belief is a truth held in the mind; faith is a fire in the heart. Joseph Fort Newton |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Elizabeth, this is absolutely beautiful! Very lovely! Denise |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Elizabeth, this is so lovely I'm delighted I found this one on pages back before I go and get my night's sleep... Thank you dear lady for a most enjoyable read... coco |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Lizzie~ I love this dreamy poetry ! You could keep me company all day ! (and often do) *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Thank you Coco for picking up this thread. With all the goings on, I forgot I even posted it. Thank you, dear poets for reading and for your very kind remarks. Liz |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
Delightfully surreal! Definitely one of mi favs! Dear Elizabeth, u touched me again wif ur lovely concoction! love, michelle If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™ |
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raleighbttrfly Member
since 2000-11-21
Posts 160Raleigh NC |
This pome is FAB. one of my fav'a sofare I loved it!!  |
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Romy Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1170Plantation, Florida |
I love this beautiful poem! |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
thats my dream, so beauifully written Life has got to chnage, Nothing stays the same, Soon it will be time, For me to move on. |
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