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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida 
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loose change in my head a quarter thought, a nickel a copper notion a tenth of a dollar slips change thrown in the wishing well -dgvarner |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
G; This is so clever and whimsical! Ellie Belief is a truth held in the mind; faith is a fire in the heart. Joseph Fort Newton |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
DgV, I don't know why but this poem makes CENTS to me! Go figure, Nice tanka! Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has passed Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
hmmmmm, I'd like to throw a nice shiny new penny in too.  |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DG~ Adorably creative. Nice job, gal. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
oh, goody goody!!! When i was young, i used to go to this place where a wishing well was around....i used to spend lots of time staring at the well, looking at the notes and coins, wondering what kind of wishes these people had made.... such sweet memories you brought back....thank you |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This was great........wah00!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
Well, this does make a penny for your thoughts seem rather tame. Very interesting work, G.To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
eL..thanks friend DEN..glad i made some 'cents'! i was a little unsure if i had! lol MARGE..glad you liked! thanks!PARKER..all your pennys are welcome in my wishing well, love  KAILE..neat story i've often done that myself..wondered what all those wishes may have been.... the first line of this one has been written down on a piece of paper for quite some time! just thought i'd pick it up and see what i could do with it thanks for the tanka shove, lol!DOPEY..thanks! glad you stopped by MAR..yep..theres more than a penny's-worth up there! thanks for reading.. hugs, g < !signature--> "so lift your heart with mine...the depth to which it grieves is the height to which it can celebrate!" -Lisa Hussey [This message has been edited by dgvarner (edited 11-26-2000).] |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very clever, dg! I love it! Denise |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
dg- well, now...is that what that jingling in your head is? lol this is a fun one... i like it lots!! love and hugs, -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
thanks DENISE! yep TRICKS! thats what that jingle jangle is in my head..all that loose change...  thanks for readin' me! hugs, g |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Canadians, have a dollar coin with a Loon on it, thus the phrase "a Loony". So what do I get when I put a Canadian Loony into your well.  Parker |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
PARKER..whatever your heart wishes for....close your eyes and think on it real good..  then pitch your loony and see what happens....... do you believe in magic?.....hugs,g |
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