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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
i wish Love was all that mattered... innocence standing in the rain drenched of itself when all that mattered was Love professed of perfect heart... and now, we cant even reach the sky's rain-- we unzip our own cloud and the rain falls in torrents, wishing Love was all that mattered... -dgvarner 11-00 |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
This one touches too close to home. *sigh* The world would be a nicer place if love were all that mattered. hugs To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very nice, dg! Denise |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
DgV, If love was all that mattered, we'd certianly experience a different world around us. Good thoughtful read! Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has passed Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
G; I loved the way you wrote this! But I'm an incurable romantic and still think that love is all that matters. Love, Ellie Belief is a truth held in the mind; faith is a fire in the heart. Joseph Fort Newton |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DG~ I like this ! 'we unzip our own cloud and the rain falls in torrents' Oh my, isn't that just the truth of it ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
there is a place like that I think, but not in this world..in your heart if you let it happen.. the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
dg- wow...i REALLY like this one... although, it does make me sad...there's a definite ache in this one... 'i wish Love was all that mattered... innocence standing in the rain drenched of itself when all that mattered was Love professed of perfect heart... and now, we cant even reach the sky's rain-- we unzip our own cloud and the rain falls in torrents, wishing Love was all that mattered...' i'm feeling every word of this one.. love it much!! love and hugs, -vicky < !signature--> "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes [This message has been edited by vlraynes (edited 11-26-2000).] |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
i thank all of you for reading me.. and your replies are much appreciated..it helps to share these things "wishing love was all that mattered.." life is complicated..love is more so.. it would indeed be a different world if love was all that mattered..wouldnt it..... there are so many different ways of loving..and as much as i love, its not the kind of love i need to have, to make things what he wants them to be..and that saddens me..and hurts me..but i cant change the past.. and, you can lead a heart to love, but you cant tell it HOW to love..it does that on its own.. PEG..your reply brings tears... TRICKS..you may remember the rain..... thank you all for reading..and 'listening'.. hugs, gale "so lift your heart with mine...the depth to which it grieves is the height to which it can celebrate!" -Lisa Hussey |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
oooh I really like this. Well done dg! Maree "If my words could blanket the skies and fill every corner and crevice of this earth, still this won't be enough" "Maree Russo" |
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bestgirl911 Senior Member
since 2000-10-04
Posts 551Clio, MI , United We Stand |
DG... How many times I have made that same wish... If only it was that easy....Maybe someday... a very heartfelt read. Best |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
MAREE..thanks BEST..perhaps we all have the same sort of wishes for the big picture.. thanks for reading.. hugs, g |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Can a little love from another sky, help to clear those clouds. Parker |
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Solstice Son Member
since 2000-09-19
Posts 469 |
* shivers * ..this one...hits like a cold spring downpour....loved it..not like..LOVE!! Sol |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
PARKER..i feel certain of it... SOL..thanks a bunch friend.. i didnt think it would have such an impact on someone else, being quickly penned as it was.. hugs, g |
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