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dgvarner
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since 2000-05-13
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High Springs, Florida

0 posted 2000-11-25 12:00 PM


i wish Love
was all that mattered...

     innocence standing in the rain
     drenched of itself
     when all that mattered
     was Love professed
     of perfect heart...

and now,
we cant even reach the
sky's rain--

we unzip our own cloud
and the rain falls
in torrents,
          wishing
     Love was all
that mattered...

-dgvarner
  11-00

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kcsgrandma
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Presque Isle, ME
1 posted 2000-11-25 12:23 PM


This one touches too close to home.  *sigh*  The world would be a nicer place if love were all that mattered.  hugs

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn

Denise
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2 posted 2000-11-25 07:33 AM


Very nice, dg!

Denise

Dennis L. White
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since 2000-02-17
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3 posted 2000-11-25 11:01 AM


DgV,
  If love was all that mattered, we'd certianly experience a different world around us. Good thoughtful read!
Dennis :^)

Moonbeams radiate
When the veiling cloud has passed
Playful shadows dance

Dennis L. White :^)



ellie LeJeune
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4 posted 2000-11-25 12:55 PM


G; I loved the way you wrote this! But I'm an incurable romantic and still think that love is all that matters. Love, Ellie

Belief is a truth held in the mind; faith is a fire in the heart.

Joseph Fort Newton



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5 posted 2000-11-26 04:20 PM


DG~
I like this !

'we unzip our own cloud
and the rain falls
in torrents'


Oh my, isn't that just the truth of it !
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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pegasus111
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6 posted 2000-11-26 04:31 PM


there is a place like that I think, but not in this world..in your heart if you let it happen..

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost


vlraynes
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Somewhere... out there...
7 posted 2000-11-26 08:31 PM



dg-
  wow...i REALLY like this one...  
  although, it does make me sad...there's
  a definite ache in this one...
  
     'i wish Love
     was all that mattered...

        innocence standing in the rain
        drenched of itself
        when all that mattered
        was Love professed
        of perfect heart...

     and now,
     we cant even reach the
     sky's rain--

     we unzip our own cloud
     and the rain falls
     in torrents,
            wishing
         Love was all
     that mattered...'


  i'm feeling every word of this one..  
  love it much!!

  love and hugs,
  -vicky



< !signature-->

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes




[This message has been edited by vlraynes (edited 11-26-2000).]

dgvarner
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since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida
8 posted 2000-11-26 10:41 PM


i thank all of you for reading me.. and your replies are much appreciated..it helps to share these things  

"wishing love was all that mattered.."  life is complicated..love is more so..  

it would indeed be a different world if love was all that mattered..wouldnt it.....

there are so many different ways of loving..and as much as i love, its not the kind of love i need to have, to make things what he wants them to be..and that saddens me..and hurts me..but i cant change the past..  
and, you can lead a heart to love, but you cant tell it HOW to love..it does that on its own..

PEG..your reply brings tears...

TRICKS..you may remember the rain.....


thank you all for reading..and 'listening'..   

hugs, gale


"so lift your heart with mine...the depth to which it grieves is the height to which it can celebrate!" -Lisa Hussey

Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095

9 posted 2000-11-27 04:59 AM


oooh I really like this.
Well done dg!

Maree

"If my words could blanket the skies
and fill every corner and crevice of
this earth, still this won't be enough"
"Maree Russo"

bestgirl911
Senior Member
since 2000-10-04
Posts 551
Clio, MI , United We Stand
10 posted 2000-11-27 09:18 AM


DG...
How many times I have made that same wish...
If only it was that easy....Maybe someday...
a very heartfelt read.

Best

dgvarner
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since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida
11 posted 2000-11-27 12:12 PM


MAREE..thanks  

BEST..perhaps we all have the same sort of wishes for the big picture..    

thanks for reading..

hugs, g

Parker
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since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129
ON
12 posted 2000-11-27 03:28 PM


Can a little love from another sky, help to clear those clouds.  

Parker

Solstice Son
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since 2000-09-19
Posts 469

13 posted 2000-11-27 03:48 PM


* shivers * ..this one...hits like a cold spring downpour....loved it..not like..LOVE!!

Sol

dgvarner
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since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida
14 posted 2000-11-27 04:01 PM


PARKER..i feel certain of it...

SOL..thanks a bunch friend..    i didnt think it would have such an impact on someone else, being quickly penned as it was..

hugs, g

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