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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Beckons in moonlight, Starlight brightens up night sky, Sparkles against dark. Life has got to chnage, Nothing stays the same, Soon it will be time, For me to move on. |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Maria; This does sparkle! Ellie Belief is a truth held in the mind; faith is a fire in the heart. Joseph Fort Newton |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Maria, The Night does have a Magic all it's own, beautifully captured in this Haiku! Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has passed Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
How pretty, Maria, as your work often is! To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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Celeste Senior Member
since 2000-11-11
Posts 597 |
Beautiful......what a picture you paint! To capture and live a moment is truly living |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
ellie - thhanks much appricate  Dennis - the night is nowt but magic, thanks KCS & dreamkeeper - thank you Life has got to chnage, Nothing stays the same, Soon it will be time, For me to move on. |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
yes, lovely things stars are, arent they? the way they lift up my spirits is simply delightful as the way you capture their radiance in this haiku |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Kaile - yep their the essence of magic thank u Life has got to chnage, Nothing stays the same, Soon it will be time, For me to move on. |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
In for a taster, Bang your head and watch stars swoon, Temporary delight.  Life has got to chnage, Nothing stays the same, Soon it will be time, For me to move on. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
What a serene mood to this one. I loved it...... *sleeps* so soothing.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
glad you like, sweet dreams dopey  Life has got to chnage, Nothing stays the same, Soon it will be time, For me to move on. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Wow - I loved the last line! Take care, Melissa Honeybee The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Excellent haiku, it's great "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Thankyou all, i dont know what to say Life has got to chnage, Nothing stays the same, Soon it will be time, For me to move on. |
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