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deleeme Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766NEW ENGLAND, USA 
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Oh Deer--I hope you see this I posted it in your woods, Ever since our brief encounter My life's not been so good! You seemed attracted to me To get together, you couldn't wait, You really left a First impression-- And it's one that my wife hates! For I was driving at the time And hugged you with her car, But that, I didn't mean to do I wish we'd stayed apart! Now my wife won't hardly speak Unless to speak of "us," As if we were an "Item" 'Bout which she likes to fuss. She's quick to remind me "You've done this before," And she has caught me red handed-- I'm blamed again, o'er and o'er! I'm sure she will get over it Once her car fixed, has been, But would you please do me a favor And ne'er get close to me again! DEER--oh dear!!! To put together words & rhyme--and touch a life--is so sublime! Thank God for such precious contact! (D.L.White) |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
I hope that it was a 4 legged deer and not that old 2 legged one that roams the poetry rooms. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
OH DEER ! I hope this doesn't mean what I think it means.  Oh, please say it isn't so. And if it is - don't tell me. I wouldn't want to know. AGAIN ... AGAIN ... ??? No ... No ... say it isn't so. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
You have to stop meeting like this!  To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
From the Deer er dear David just to say I'm sorry I got in the way. I heard you're a poet don't you just know it, So I wanted to learn to rhyme. Maybe some other time, when your wife I won't cause such strife. Bring paper and pen when we meet again. Just want to learn to rhyme, my friend, your car I didn't mean to bend. |
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deleeme Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766NEW ENGLAND, USA |
Wow, I must have posted this in the right place--I didn't really expect to hear back from the deer. Thanks for relaying the message, Ellie. And Thank you all for your responses and concern. It was indeed the of the 4 legged variety-and yes it has been my misfortune to mess up at least 3 diffent vehicles due to them here in deer-rich southern Arkansas. To put together words & rhyme--and touch a life--is so sublime! Thank God for such precious contact! (D.L.White) |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
LOL...David, it sounds like you should be out walking instead of driving...now take care...and send those deer my way...I've a pasture reserved for them... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Dear Oh DEER Brother of mine, In the deer....uh..doghouse again? What is a fellow to do, especially one with such animal magnetism? Sorry about the car, I'm glad you both survived! Good Poem. Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has passed Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
I hate it when I do that..lol the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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Dopey Dope
Moderator
Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Poor deer!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
Golly David! Tis is so kewl! hehehehehe humour in poetry... wat more could one ask for? * applause * *S* love, michelle If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™ |
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