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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Timeless hearts beat on, Keep on ticking overtime, Waits for a moment. Sometimes you have to let go and move on, But never let go of the memories. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Maria~ This is very, very well done. So much thought in such a minute package. Wonderful ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Thanks marge much apperiated  Sometimes you have to let go and move on, But never let go of the memories. |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
thought-provoking piece..this reader wonders what these "timeless hearts" are waiting for... i will like it to be love...am i right?LOL |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
Rather lovely .......very lovely in fact Jon |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I'll agree with jon.....a very lovely poem. Keep these up!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Kaile - yeah your right, thnaks Jon & Dopey - Thankyou Life has got to chnage, Nothing stays the same, Soon it will be time, For me to move on. |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Maria, Very lovely indeed! The heart waits, beating its rhythm out of synch with the rhythm of the clock. It's just not fair! Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has passed Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) |
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Romy Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1170Plantation, Florida |
This is very clever! |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Dennis - nope its not fair. But thank you Debbie - thank you Life has got to chnage, Nothing stays the same, Soon it will be time, For me to move on. |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
Maria..this was lovely, dark, and deep.. the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Thanks for your reponse Life has got to chnage, Nothing stays the same, Soon it will be time, For me to move on. |
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