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Alicat Member Elite
since 1999-05-23
Posts 4094Coastal Texas 
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Unfettered the dance rises upward Swirling and spinning LIke ember sparks flying Into the silent new moon night Alicat If I were any more laid back, I'd be in a coma. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
O, where ARE the marshmallows when you need them? Seriously, however, I felt the HEAT... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
AliCat~ I like !  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Alicat- very beautiful...short and sweet. i like it lots. and, Sunshine...could you pass those marshmallows this way? lol -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Whew! It is getting hot in here! Great poem, Ali! Denise |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
cool deal here Ali - short, more kind of like an explosion of thought! I understand! C |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
So incredibly vivid! Burn mine, Ilove crispy marshmallows! Ali, this imagery is lovely. Ellie le coeur a ses raisons que la raison ne con-nait point....the heart has its reasons that reason knows nothing of.. |
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Alicat Member Elite
since 1999-05-23
Posts 4094Coastal Texas |
 Thanks everyone! When I wrote this, I had in mind a country, and I mean country, dance, where boots of men and women rattle the barndoors laid as a stage, the dust motes keeping counter-step. But, what the hey, it's been a while since I've had a maller-roast...s'mores anyone?  |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
~like ember sparks flying into the silent new moon light~ Great write! Deb |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
Hot sultry camp fire passion...........that's what I like. Nice jon |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I'm with Jon!!!! ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Hiya Kitten! Nice work here. I just wanna ask one thing..WHERE'S THE INNUENDO??? *KICKS AND SCREAMS* Seriously...You have a most beautiful way of describing what you were wanting to. Made it sound much more appealing and less...err...country? |
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Justin Nuendo Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 86Ozzz |
Uhh ??? I'm here..been here all the time. Yo Ali...I'll dance with ye anytime. Btw, whatever happened to that grin of yours ??  |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
any room for one more at the camp fire Life has got to chnage, Nothing stays the same, Soon it will be time, For me to move on. |
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