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Moon Dust![]() ![]()
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Salty taste tingles, Rushing by my feet again, Taking with the breeze. Sometimes you have to let go and move on, But never let go of the memories. |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
Makes me think of days at the ocean, but clearly not in Maine in October! ![]() To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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Moon Dust![]() ![]()
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
KCS - Not in the UK either, but i'd thought I'd relive the days of summer ![]() Sometimes you have to let go and move on, But never let go of the memories. |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Your words brought me there. Thank you. Wonderfully written haiku. Take care. *Peace. |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
Makes a salty Dog Happy......... jon |
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kaile![]() ![]()
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
you just described one of my favourite moments perfectly ![]() |
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
A great haiku!!! Made me want to put on my bathing suit and jump in the ocean! ![]() I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Moon Dust![]() ![]()
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
I'd like to thank you all. ![]() Life has got to chnage, Nothing stays the same, Soon it will be time, For me to move on. |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Maria, Beautiful haiku image of the tide, with the taste, feel and sensation incorporated here! Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has passed Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) |
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Romy Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1170Plantation, Florida |
a nice moment, thanks! |
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Moon Dust![]() ![]()
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Thank you both very much ![]() Life has got to chnage, Nothing stays the same, Soon it will be time, For me to move on. |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Great Haiku Maria ! ![]() |
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Moon Dust![]() ![]()
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Thanks munda, guess i'm in a hoilday mood at the mo ![]() Life has got to chnage, Nothing stays the same, Soon it will be time, For me to move on. |
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