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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Salty taste tingles, Rushing by my feet again, Taking with the breeze. Sometimes you have to let go and move on, But never let go of the memories. |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
Makes me think of days at the ocean, but clearly not in Maine in October!  To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
KCS - Not in the UK either, but i'd thought I'd relive the days of summer Thanks Sometimes you have to let go and move on, But never let go of the memories. |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Your words brought me there. Thank you. Wonderfully written haiku. Take care. *Peace. |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
Makes a salty Dog Happy......... jon |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
you just described one of my favourite moments perfectly |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
A great haiku!!! Made me want to put on my bathing suit and jump in the ocean!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
I'd like to thank you all. Life has got to chnage, Nothing stays the same, Soon it will be time, For me to move on. |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Maria, Beautiful haiku image of the tide, with the taste, feel and sensation incorporated here! Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has passed Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) |
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Romy Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1170Plantation, Florida |
a nice moment, thanks! |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Thank you both very much Life has got to chnage, Nothing stays the same, Soon it will be time, For me to move on. |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Great Haiku Maria !  |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Thanks munda, guess i'm in a hoilday mood at the mo Life has got to chnage, Nothing stays the same, Soon it will be time, For me to move on. |
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