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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. 
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Fall drained of its' hues Threat'ning sky a murky gray Laden clouds erupt Bitter rain assaults the gloom Ushered in on winters wind Falls' Majesty rest In hearts, poised with certain hope With brief hiatus Floras sure resurrection Phoenix, rising from ashes 11-13-2000 |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
this was really nice. evolution of the seasons..some things you can always count on.. the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Yep, some things you can always count on... like Dennis writing a great tanka.  |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Such pretty images Great tanka Sometimes you have to let go and move on, But never let go of the memories. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very nice, Dennis! Denise |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
"Floras sure resurrection Phoenix, rising from ashes" Ah, Dennis, this is magnificent! The hope that springs eternal! This poem is so incredibly majestic, Bravo! Love, Sis Belief is a truth held in the mind; faith is a fire in the heart. Joseph Fort Newton |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
There's little I can add to what has been said, but I want to join in the kudos. You really do shine in these forms. To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Wonderful tanka! like the others said, the images were great.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Dennis~ This is so lovely ... it fairly blooms with anticipation. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Romy Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1170Plantation, Florida |
Beautiful images of Fall and promises of Spring! Lovely poem! |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
Can't wait for that spring Dennis.....thanx for reminding me ......it'll be a coming. Jon |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
after the storm comes the sunshine...liked the hint of promise here....thank you |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Dennis- wow...another incredible write! you are the master of tanka. so much thought and feeling packed into so few words...wonderful! i love it! hugs, -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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