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Dennis L. White
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since 2000-02-17

Posts 1463
Michigan, U.S.A.

0 posted 2000-11-14 06:32 PM

Pilgrims, Indians
Together at Harvest Feast
Thankful for bounty
Each gives the Great Spirit thanks
Spoken in their native tongues

11-14-2000

[This message has been edited by Dennis L. White (edited 11-14-2000).]

Moon Dust

Member Elite

since 1999-06-11

Posts 2177
Skelmersdale, UK

1 posted 2000-11-14 06:34 PM

A nice festive tanka, well done

Sometimes you have to let go and move on,
But never let go of the memories.

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2000-11-14 06:57 PM

Dennis~

Blessings are bestowed
Spirits joined in peacefulness
Many moons ago
Oh, but that we could return
To those days of yesteryear

*Thank you for the inspirational grace of your Tanka.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10

Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA

3 posted 2000-11-14 07:52 PM

This my prayer for you
Gratitude and Joy be yours
and all those you love
God's Spirit fill you with Grace
and His Light shine upon you

A special tanka prayer for you, my friend, in gratitude for the joy you bring, especially the joy of this most beautiful Tanka of thanksgiving. Love, Elie

Belief is a truth held in the mind; faith is a fire in the heart.

Joseph Fort Newton

kcsgrandma
Senior Member

since 2000-09-24

Posts 1522
Presque Isle, ME

4 posted 2000-11-14 10:34 PM

A lovely Thanksgiving reminder that we are all God's children. Thank you, Dennis.

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn

Jon Mewett
Senior Member

since 2000-03-04

Posts 1304

5 posted 2000-11-15 07:15 AM

Amen to what goes before..........nice again Dennis.

Jon

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

6 posted 2000-11-15 02:19 PM

Great Tanka!
Good spirit for the upcoming holiday!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!

kaile

Member Ascendant

since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

7 posted 2000-11-16 11:21 AM

liked the last line especially

"Spoken in their native tongues"

gives me a warm fuzzy feeling inside

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

8 posted 2000-11-17 02:09 AM

Dennis-
  what a beautiful tanka you've penned.
  this is simply wonderful!
  love it.

  hugs,
  -vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes

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