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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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She Moon - Three Moon ~*Marge Tindal*~ She-Moon glows because she knows - we watch in sweet amazement at the rays she throws simply glowing and heaven-sent From darkest sky at the start of night softly glowing with her light flowing she waltzes across the evening and then on morning leaves a promise to return with stars in tow for another premier show Oh, lady of the moon make it soon I will be waiting anticipating the beauty that she wears - just a glow of stars to show she places in her hair - across the sky and not too shy she waltzes thru til morn and then as I peek she winks - I think and sets my heart aglow Oh She-Moon ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
Oh, Marge! How pretty! I just love the way you made it into full moon shapes, too.  To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This was a great post. I loved how you made them into full moons. Made this piece very interesting.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
delicious, Marge..love this.. the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
oh she moon, she winks at me too Sometimes you have to let go and move on, But never let go of the memories. |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Dear Marge; Your creativity is ever astounding. These are so exquisitely lovely! You are amazing! Love, Ellie le coeur a ses raisons que la raison ne con-nait point....the heart has its reasons that reason knows nothing of.. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
KCS He painted it high up in the sky I just happened to walk by ~*~ Dopey Glad you caught the glowing of that she-moon showing off her special light all across my night ~*~ Pegasus Pleased as pleased can be that you found such fun delight in that she-moon now walking through the night ~*~ Maria I'm glad you caught that wink for it causes one to think - I am glad you saw it too ~*~ Ellie She is a sight to behold - one so full and really bold What a beauty winking cutie ~*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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compassion Member
since 2000-11-01
Posts 135USA |
...?...  Nice write, marge...would loved to had your view from your descript. |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Marge, Lovely portrayal and personification of our friend the moon! Another beautiful display of your endless talent. Your poetry Beams! Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has passed Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) |
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Celeste Senior Member
since 2000-11-11
Posts 597 |
Oh! Completely beautiful! What a picture you've painted. A magic you've captured. I truly truly enjoyed!!!! To capture and live a moment is truly living |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Compassion Such a view it was and He set it there high above me hanging It was such a lovely view I would hope that you could see it too ~*~ Dennis Beaming is just what it did - before my very eyes - caught I was - in the glory of the beauty of it all She Moon was a glowing ball ~*~ ~*~ Dream Keeper Such a lovely glow it was It lit the very night I'm pleased to know that you also loved the sight of such a glowing orb of light - shining oh so bright ~*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very pretty, Marge! Perhaps I should get out more at night! Denise |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
~*~ Denise Peek your head out the door - I think tonight she's doing an encore Such a beauty CUTIE ~*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
I think I'll have to gaze some more So I'll poke my head out of the door Yes dear Marge it's as you said The moon is getting out of bed. Winking brightly. Jon |
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a_little_girl Member
since 2000-05-08
Posts 307San Alejandro, HI, USA |
This really original, Marge. I like the simile of a moon to a girl. This is truely wonderful work. --Little Girl |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
~*~ JonM I thought sure that she was done but came that moon for one more run - across the path of Milky Way coming back another night full of sheer delight ~*~ ~*~ A_Little_Girl She-Moon is very real that I can testify - who else but woman could prance across the sky - and leave the world in awe just waiting for her return - so anticipating Just like a woman She-Moon ~*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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