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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Delicate moon beams, Reflect off rushing waves, Lies beneath the shore. Sometimes you have to let go and move on, But never let go of the memories. |
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Celeste Senior Member
since 2000-11-11
Posts 597 |
I have often thought of attempting haikus but so far haven't. You show beautiful imagery and a depth in this one I really enjoyed. Nicely done! |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautiful, Maria! Denise |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
lovely, Maria... the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
Pretty thoughts, Maria. To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This was wonderful. A great haiku!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Dreamkeeper - You should after your first one you'll write a million of these things  And thank u all for your kind thoughts Sometimes you have to let go and move on, But never let go of the memories. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Maria~ Pretty thoughts indeed. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
And thank u too marge Sometimes you have to let go and move on, But never let go of the memories. |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Maria, Your haiku are always delightful, this one is no exception! Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has passed Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
Nice one, Maria |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
The Moon seems quite bright through the window tonight...........nice Jon |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
This is wonderful, I love it Another great haiku!"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Dennis - And you always have such kind words to say about them, thanks Kaile - thanks much appericated Jon - love those nights, thanks Lakewalker - thank u too Sometimes you have to let go and move on, But never let go of the memories. |
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