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blackhalo Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 467Denver, CO |
Lost somewhere Between then and now Do I go here or there When I'm feeling down I used to turn to him But I pushed him away Torn apart limb by limb Had too much to say Cannot be found Where my hopefulness sits Slowly being drowned In this odd midst Lies aand twised fate Surrounded by tears Standing at the gat Are all of my fears So here I stand Waiting for tomorrow Listen for the band To drown all my sorrows The last time I posted something like this, it was mistaken for something completely different. I am slowly getting over my despair and hate for the world. I hope you all will not take this the wrong way! Luv & peace! Alicia A. Renzelman |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
Alicia..this was nice..I am so glad you are getting better. ![]() the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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Solstice Son Member
since 2000-09-19
Posts 469 |
...I like it...no mistaking what it is.. Sol ![]() |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
A fine poem of transition and hope........you're walking taller now....great. ![]() Jon |
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compassion Member
since 2000-11-01
Posts 135USA |
Alicia, Although I feel your sadness, I sense hope somewhere in there and that's important~hang in there like the rest of us, you'll make it! A very good write, btw. ![]() |
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kelieth Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 314Normal IL - USA |
Pain will heal as time flies. I'm happy you are opening your eyes. The world can bring both sorrow and joy They'll all balance out by the end of the 'morrow. Great read enjoyed every line. Kevin "Anything is possible with patience, time is the tool use it to reach your goals." |
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bestgirl911 Senior Member
since 2000-10-04
Posts 551Clio, MI , United We Stand |
Glad to hear the hope is there...Just hang on and be yourself! And of course stick with us...lol. Best |
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blackhalo Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 467Denver, CO |
I will start from the end of the replies: Best: Of course, I will always stay here! No worries! Kevin: Thanks for the compassion. Sometimes, it is all that is really needed... Compassion, There is always a hint of hope. Jon: 5' 8" and still loving it! LOL! Thanks. You are always here waiting for me to post these things. Appreciate it. Sol: Am more than glad... Pegasus: I think that everyone is glad I am getting better. They're just tired of me complaining all the time! LOL! Alicia A. Renzelman |
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