The Corner Pub |
Moonglow |
pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
Flourescent moon in pastel light, so dear to me in darkest night. Clense my soul with mystic rays, invade my dreams, fulfill my days. A billion stars with ageless light, bejewel thy head with clusters bright. Tides obey thy ancient song, drifting clouds thy crown adorn. Thy silent phases constant, true, reflect thy children, old to new. Royal mother of nocturnal might, heed thy subject's plea tonight. Embrace the creature earthly bound, whose love for thee in whispers sound, a truth known only to the dove, my pledge of everlasting love. the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
||
© Copyright 2000 pegasus111 - All Rights Reserved | |||
Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Beautifully written. A wonderful poem ! |
||
Suzanne Arlene Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 377Ontario, Canada |
I enjoyed your poem very much Suzanne |
||
Solstice Son Member
since 2000-09-19
Posts 469 |
This is simply GORGEOUS!!!! more than that I cannot say for words elude at the moment... Sol |
||
Dopey Dope
Moderator
Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This was wonderful! I'm left in awe. I love the style of this poem. The elizabethan adds to it perfectly. Great job! I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
||
pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
Munda, Suzanne, Sol, Dopey_Dope..thank you for your kind words.. the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
||
ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
This is a masterpiece that is up there with the great poets! Astoundingly exqisite and written with skill and precision that is glorious! Bravo Pegasus, Bravo!!!! Ellie le coeur a ses raisons que la raison ne con-nait point....the heart has its reasons that reason knows nothing of.. |
||
kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
I am really impressed pegasus! This is excellently well written and very beautiful besides. To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
||
pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
ellie..I am glad it pleased you.. KCS..you are too kind..thanks. the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
||
Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Pegasus, Wonderful praise for the nocturnal sentry of our nights! What a welcome friend to cheer us through the dark hours. Very well written my friend. Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has passed Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) |
||
Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
A wonderful prayer of a poem Peg.......beautiful style to it. Lovely to read Jon |
||
compassion Member
since 2000-11-01
Posts 135USA |
Peg, Lovely indeed. My treat and enjoyed. |
||
kelieth Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 314Normal IL - USA |
Love as they say can move mountains well my friend so can your words. Amazing piece. Great job.< !signature--> Kevin "Anything is possible with patience, time is the tool use it to reach your goals." [This message has been edited by kelieth (edited 11-10-2000).] |
||
Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
love the style and the imagary. Very nice Sometimes you have to let go and move on, But never let go of the memories. |
||
⇧ top of page ⇧ | ||
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. |