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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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The Spiral Path The spiral path, encircling now In search of round, in that of whole. Unclutter mind, dilute the pain, Search out the circle, for harmony's gain. When outcomes seem impossible, Must learn to choose, reacting then. Can't change the 'out', but can the 'in' Old life decried, new start begin. Would like to learn, remember how, Of joy to love, to live again. The hard of soft, the right of wrong The need to break, old lover's song. The spiral path encircling now. Must learn to live, to realize, Join in, embrace, this circular maze. Awaken now, this soul, to graze. ~Wynter Bliss |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Oh my ! I really enjoyed this poem. Especially love your style.  |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Thank you very much..you placed a warm smile on my face this cool afternoon *s ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
"The spiral path encircling now, Must learn to live to realize, Join in embrace this circular maze, Awaken now this soul to graze" My oh my Wynter, such a delite to read this poem (I loved especially the above quote) Coco [This message has been edited by CocoBaci (edited 11-03-2000).] |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
This has definately given me insight. Thanks for sharing Sometimes you have to let go and move on, But never let go of the memories. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Coco- well I am pleased you enjoyed my words and that quote..I am trying to follow my written advice..."tis not easily done Maria- I thank you for stopping to read and respond. ~Wynter< !signature--> "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (edited 11-04-2000).] |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Another beautifully done poem! That comes as no surprise! Denise |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
So Sweet was your comment >>huggz<< Denise ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
Would like to learn, remember how, Of joy to love, to live again. You have more insight than you may believe, and you will guide yourself to a place safe...custom built for your heart. I'm sure happiness will return to you again. The spiral path encircling now. Must learn to live, to realize, Join in, embrace, this circular maze. Awaken now, this soul, to graze. You've already given yourself the answer Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
Great thought and expression. Almost an introspection of ones self. Excellent piece you shared with us. ~Sheri "The things that come to those that wait may be the things left by those who got there first" |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
Who said.......'All life is a circle'...you've captured this so well....great. jon |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Beautiful and so in depth as you look within for the answer and there is the only place it is to be found. This poem is exquisite! Ellie le coeur a ses raisons que la raison ne con-nait point....the heart has its reasons that reason knows nothing of.. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Ron- I think if I could jump through this screen of blue I may just give you the warmest hug...thank you  ~Wynter I have awakened feeling slightly more alive today than yesterday... "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
ahhh..there are so many of us on this spiral path..wonder we don't stumble over one another.. well done. Bravo!the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Hello, this was great!! I loved it very much. Another wonderful piece.  "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Wynter~ I love circles ... the very movement that brings us back to where we need to be. This is very well written. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
D_D- Oh you always say the nicest things, you Ellie- sometimes that is the only place where we shall find an answer {{huggz}} Irie- yes I do believe I was searching inside for some answers here...thank you ~Sheri jon- sometimes I do surprise myself ( wondering where my thoughts have been hidden all these years)...thank you for peeking in. pegasus- stumble we might one day..you do know it's a very small world out there.. Marge- I am very glad you enjoy my words thank you all for your supportive responses ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Solstice Son Member
since 2000-09-19
Posts 469 |
*G* I like this....not just for its bold description of daily life ....but because I know the city whose streets match this poem exactly..Kudos!! Sol |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
can you tell me where that city is...want to see if it is mine.. thank you Sol... ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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