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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. 
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Falls Kaleidoscope Like shattered stained glass window Colours swept away The leaves are all down Ecological litter Raked in piles and burnt Wispy smoke burns eyes Acrid smell assaults the nose Crisp air reddens cheeks Ashes rise from fire Hover o'er the glowing pile Like feather on wind 11-9-2000 [This message has been edited by Dennis L. White (edited 11-09-2000).] |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
nice images, Dennis..I love the fall. the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
Dennis, you are indeed the King of Haiku. Great images, as usual. I especially love the Ecological litter line. Good work. To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
The Haiku King reigns on fall's poetic bon fires smoky words delight! these are delightful autumn gems! love, sis le coeur a ses raisons que la raison ne con-nait point....the heart has its reasons that reason knows nothing of.. |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Wonderful job David, these are great. I hate raking that "Ecological litter"  "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This is great. THe images are wonderful. A nice read!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Piles, laden with wet Golden, turning to crisp brown Until the rains came. Dancing in the winds Leaving like the others, each Reaching their life's end. ~Wynter we can't burn here...and mine are awaiting their pick up...enjoyed your thoughts Dennis "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
Its great to read one of your H's again Dennis and these are stunners.......can't wait for the winter ones Jon |
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compassion Member
since 2000-11-01
Posts 135USA |
i just keep raking and raking and raking.. A lovely sweep of Autumn haiku's! |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Bare trees bow to fall, Golden dust squares every inch, Dying in the wind. I love autum haikus Sometimes you have to let go and move on, But never let go of the memories. |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
how nice is it to return and to be able to read haiku from you again!!!  liked the line "Like feather on wind" muchly...gives me a dreamy feel |
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