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Moon Dust
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0 posted 2000-11-03 08:02 PM


For somewhere down my jouney,
What if I'd tread down the other road,
Would I still be lost yet,
Or would that path lead to the same place,
Parhaps down a different route,
Would I be the same,

And for all the questions I try to answer,
Why is it there are more to be asked,
Why do our paths keep crossing,
If I've already said goodbye once,
But I know I'll carry on my jouney,
With or without you.


Sometimes you have to let go and move on,
But never let go of the memories.


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Dennis L. White
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1 posted 2000-11-03 08:28 PM


Maria,
  With or without you, the journey continues! Thoughtful exploration of circumstance! Good luck on your journey!
Dennis :^)

Moonbeams radiate
When the veiling cloud has passed
Playful shadows dance

Dennis L. White :^)



Moon Dust
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2 posted 2000-11-03 08:36 PM


Thankyou Dennis, guess its the only thing to do

Sometimes you have to let go and move on,
But never let go of the memories.


compassion
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3 posted 2000-11-04 02:20 AM


Maria,
  A good thought provoking poem and I have had these same thoughts before. Enjoyed this very much.   Connie

"And for all the questions I try to answer,
Why is it there are more to be asked,
Why do our paths keep crossing,
If I've already said goodbye once,"

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4 posted 2000-11-04 02:08 PM


Thanks Connie

Sometimes you have to let go and move on,
But never let go of the memories.


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