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bestgirl911 Senior Member
since 2000-10-04
Posts 551Clio, MI , United We Stand |
It started with a look, Deep in each other's eyes. The longing and the passion, Soon began to rise. You gently put your hand, Underneath my chin, The butterflies are moving, In my stomach, deep within. You started leaning closer, Our lips about to touch. Is it getting hot in here? I feel a little flush. Then I felt your sweet, soft lips, Gently touching mine. Our passions, now, unfolding, Just in the nick of time. I recall it clearly, Every single day, 'Cuz every time you kiss me, I still feel the same way. |
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BSC
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Awwwwww Best ~ This is just so sweet!!! How beautifully you have written of that special moment. Bonnie |
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Solstice Son Member
since 2000-09-19
Posts 469 |
..grrr....*pouts moodily* i am so envious... beautifully done m'dear... Sol  |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Sigh! How deliciously romantic!!!!!!!! le coeur a ses raisons que la raison ne con-nait point....the heart has its reasons that reason knows nothing of.. |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
ahh so sweet Sometimes you have to let go and move on, But never let go of the memories. |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
Ahhhh!!! This is sooo sweet! I just floated along (trying to remember)...good job! Marcy |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very nice! Beautiful! Denise |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Hey, nicely done This is very sweet!"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
awww - ok, I got the warm and fuzzy's goin' on...  Chris |
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a_little_girl Member
since 2000-05-08
Posts 307San Alejandro, HI, USA |
Wow...this is some great romance...I like the style and imagery that you used here. This is some great stuff and you should write more of this. --Little Girl |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
A very sweet poem! I liked it very much!  "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Suzanne Arlene Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 377Ontario, Canada |
I enjoyed your poem It makes me remember my special kisses |
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DawnG
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
This brought back memories of my first true love. Thanks for the great memories Dawn |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
BestGirl~ You drew the precious memories perfectly ! You will always remember that first kiss ! Yep ... always ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Very romantic poem! You captured the moment perfectly!! Great write!! sp I won't go, I won't sleep, I can't breathe until you're resting here with me... |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
Lush...warm ..soft ...and sensual.....romance so beautiful. Jon |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Those softened lips will get you every time..I definitely can relate to this one...as my favorite part of an evening is when my face is cupped into his warm gentle hands and his soft lips meet mine. ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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bestgirl911 Senior Member
since 2000-10-04
Posts 551Clio, MI , United We Stand |
Thank you all sooo much for the wonderful comments.....*blushing*....lol....thanks. Best |
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