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pegasus111
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0 posted 2000-11-02 09:06 AM


rainbow arch
after summer rain
nature's lovely lie


the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost


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BloomingRose
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1 posted 2000-11-02 09:39 AM


Great write, although I did read that rainbows are a promise.  
Deb

pegasus111
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2 posted 2000-11-02 11:42 AM


ahhh...Debbie, my dear, like rainbows, most promises are illusions...

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost


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3 posted 2000-11-03 08:32 PM


lies are sometimes better than the truth eh?
Still love a good rainbow. Esspecailly two at the same time

Sometimes you have to let go and move on,
But never let go of the memories.


nakdthoughts
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4 posted 2000-11-04 07:08 AM





rainbow arch
after summer rain
nature's lovely lie


at rainbow's end, comes
the promise, that shines upon you,
to  brighten the day.

~Wynter Bliss...trying to be positive  
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"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II




[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (edited 11-04-2000).]

pegasus111
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5 posted 2000-11-04 10:50 AM


Maria..sometimes, yes.  

Nakdthoughts..thanks.

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost


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6 posted 2000-11-04 05:05 PM


One day I was sitting in class and i began to think.......Are promises due to a lack of trust?

Just a thought to ponder....

"I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust."

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!

pegasus111
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7 posted 2000-11-04 11:21 PM


maybe not so much a lack of trust as reassurance. thanks for the read.

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost


kaile
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8 posted 2000-11-11 12:23 PM


well sometimes i prefer to be lied to especially when the lie is more beautiful than the truth?

missed ur haiku,pegasus111

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