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Honeybee
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0 posted 2000-10-31 03:21 PM




~SUN'S LAUGHTER HAIKU~

5-7-5

Rays of sunlight dance
glistening upon clear waters
reflecting laughter

*By Melissa Honeybee*


The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams



© Copyright 2000 Melissa P. Long-Monette - All Rights Reserved
2dalimit
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1 posted 2000-10-31 08:01 PM


And I am sure it is a pretty reflection, too.
Melton

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2 posted 2000-10-31 08:06 PM


Melissa~
Tonight on my way home from work,
I pulled over to watch the sunset across a lake.

I saw that laughter in shades of magenta ...
and with the light ripples ...
I felt the sunlight was indeed laughing as it danced
it's way into night !

How did you know ?
Thank you for this lovely write, sweet poet.
Love you~
~*Marge*~



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Denise
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3 posted 2000-10-31 09:35 PM


Melissa, this is beautiful!

Denise

Dennis L. White
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4 posted 2000-11-01 09:16 AM


Melissa,
  What a delightful vision of the sun in this Haiku form! Well Done!
Dennis :^)

Moonbeams radiate
When the veiling cloud has passed
Playful shadows dance

Dennis L. White :^)



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5 posted 2000-11-01 07:14 PM


Reminds me of summer. lovely

Sometimes you have to let go and move on,
But never let go of the memories.


Jon Mewett
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6 posted 2000-11-02 04:36 AM


Very nice Mellissa lovely image.

Jon

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7 posted 2000-11-03 07:25 AM


My smile grows each time I read this one, wonderful!  

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~ My Angel.

Sunshine
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8 posted 2000-11-03 12:21 PM


O Melissa...how this likes me....



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9 posted 2000-11-04 05:08 PM


The serene mood in this one appeals to me..... I appeal to it too.




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10 posted 2000-11-04 05:52 PM


Beautiful, this is great, it reminds me of all the wonderful sunsets on the lake.  nicely done

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11 posted 2000-11-11 12:25 PM


Very nice, melissa
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