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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA 
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~SUN'S LAUGHTER HAIKU~ 5-7-5 Rays of sunlight dance glistening upon clear waters reflecting laughter *By Melissa Honeybee* The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
And I am sure it is a pretty reflection, too. Melton |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Melissa~ Tonight on my way home from work, I pulled over to watch the sunset across a lake. I saw that laughter in shades of magenta ... and with the light ripples ... I felt the sunlight was indeed laughing as it danced it's way into night ! How did you know ? Thank you for this lovely write, sweet poet. Love you~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Melissa, this is beautiful! Denise |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Melissa, What a delightful vision of the sun in this Haiku form! Well Done! Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has passed Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Reminds me of summer. lovely  Sometimes you have to let go and move on, But never let go of the memories. |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
Very nice Mellissa lovely image. Jon |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
My smile grows each time I read this one, wonderful! "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
O Melissa...how this likes me....  Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
The serene mood in this one appeals to me..... I appeal to it too.  "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Beautiful, this is great, it reminds me of all the wonderful sunsets on the lake. nicely done "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
Very nice, melissa |
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