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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa 
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Love is like a candle slim and fragile flickering in the night wind bending, turning in the shifting breeze melting the soft wax of time spilling downward in warm rivlets hardening into cool reality This tiny flame struggling to survive emits a dancing glow of soft luminescence darting into the dim corners of the unknown retreating, advancing, laboring in the quest for truth Threatened perpetually with extinction by the gale of prevarication the squall of intolerance the gust of indifference it prevails and offers hope against the darkness |
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BSC
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since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Beautiful analogy Pegasus... "Threatened perpetually with extinction by the gale of prevarication the squall of intolerance the gust of indifference it prevails and offers hope against the darkness" Love it....Bonnie |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
loved it  Sometimes you have to let go and move on, But never let go of the memories. |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Pegasus; The analogy of a candle flame to the enduring fragility of love that is a light in the darkness of the loneliness of the world, is exqisite. Ellie P.S. Thank you for your reply, more of my poems can be found if you do a search above, I've written hundreds! le coeur a ses raisons que la raison ne con-nait point....the heart has its reasons that reason knows nothing of.. |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
This is really nice Peg........candles are so emotive yet capable in fire of total destruction....on the other hand they are fragile too..Lovely Jon [This message has been edited by Jon Mewett (edited 11-02-2000).] |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
Bonny..thank you dear Maria..you are very kind..thanks ellie, my dear, I cherish your words. Jon..since I admire your work so much, your comments are especially welcome..thanks. the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
I agree with Bonnie, great analogy. Quite beautiful indeed! Deb |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
thanks for the kind words, Deb. the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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