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niiiccee311 New Member
since 2000-10-31
Posts 6 |
i see you out of the corner of my eye, to me your nice and close, but in reality your just about as far as the sky, i know your there but i cant touch you, i go to touch you and a force field keeps me from doin it to you, my heart poors for you and that distance is closen in on you, i miss the days that we spent together, the days we drank, and fell in into a bank, we started to kiss and i knew we were ment to be forever, we made it to third, i felt like a bird, flyin so high, then told after all i was a fool, just a guy that was there to fly, as much as it hurts me to lose that, i have to be the one to say what, the end was close, too close for me to handle, i take this candle, i take it and burn it for you, see what i figure is its just a drip, it will all be over when i have a bad trip, i would fly so high, that i would reach my way to heaven, and i would find out i wasnt just a guy, i was the one you couldnt be behaven, i wish i didnt do what i did, now i cant stop bein sane, girl you made me make a bid, on how much my life was insane, i cant believe were done, and i cant believe i am gone, almost takin my life, almost seen the light, thinkin bout a knife, but instead takin pills whatever was in my sight, i sit here in the hospitol and think of what happened, what i did, i just wanted a way out and i thought the pills would put it in captioned, i was acting like a kid, please take me back, u only live once, now lets ride... |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
There's a lot in this one piece! Welcome to Passions! Christopher |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
welcome to passions..  the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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bestgirl911 Senior Member
since 2000-10-04
Posts 551Clio, MI , United We Stand |
Welcome to passions! I hope you enjoy it here as much as I do. Best [This message has been edited by bestgirl911 (edited 11-01-2000).] |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Welcome and a good start too Sometimes you have to let go and move on, But never let go of the memories. |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
Welcome ........this is a sad and stark poem but also I feel hopeful.....keep writing and posting. Jon |
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a_little_girl Member
since 2000-05-08
Posts 307San Alejandro, HI, USA |
First of all...welcome!!Second, this is a well written poem, so keep on writing!! --Little Girl |
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nicolette Junior Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 42St. Paul, Minnesota |
Welcome! This poem captures so many feelings. Very good job...keep writing. |
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ThyWizard Member
since 2000-08-06
Posts 56Chambersburg, PA, USA |
Excellent emotion, such a strong relationship to some lives that are led...welcome to passions, keep up the good work. " If who i am is what i have and what i have is lost, then who am I? " - unknown Thy Wizard |
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