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epoet Member
since 2000-05-11
Posts 291grand rapid,MI, usa 
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Here I am a lost soul in this cruel world. Wandering around day to day trying to avoid pain. Everywhere I look I see despair my heart aches with compassion. Pity is taken on me by everyone I meet. They think that I don't deserve to be wandering their streets. I wander alone no hope in sight just waiting to see if I'll survive the night. To feel love sorrow and joy then I could say that I am alive. However, for me tis the end for my days have been numbered my friend. I long to hear the mournful sighs escaping my body one last time. P. J. Kotrch carpe diem A soul once touched is a soul once blessed by love |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very sad poem, epoet. Denise |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
yes, very sad indeed..but, well written..may I suggest a change in color to make it easier to read? the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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kid D Member
since 2000-10-18
Posts 64 |
its sad but so true, we live our busy lives and look past the homeless...but they are people too...and sadly for most death means freedom...nice write  i read this this morning and remembered to write what my mind almost wanted me to forget.... will put it here if that's ok, cause your words helped it to be paycheck compensation on the steps spattered blood crimson evidence of last night's pain respect walked around instead of on late for work tried not to think of the steps where someone sat and bled someone sat and cried [This message has been edited by kid D (edited 11-01-2000).] |
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bestgirl911 Senior Member
since 2000-10-04
Posts 551Clio, MI , United We Stand |
This is very sad....as they are people like you and me with hearts and minds...and love. Best |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
epoet~ This is sad, but a well written poem that exposes the truth of life on the streets. |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
Sad yeah.........but sadness in a strange way strengthens the soul makes it whole. Jon |
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epoet Member
since 2000-05-11
Posts 291grand rapid,MI, usa |
thank you one and all for the comments. I was feeling a little depressed when I wrote this so I apologize for the sadness of it. I originally intended this one to be a little more up. It was supposed to be a poem about whats' wrong in society today, but I like the turn it took and where I ended up. P. J. Kotrch carpe diem A soul once touched is a soul once blessed by love |
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