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Tramp Poet Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 754Could Be Anywhere... 
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JUST A RESTIN Sittin here under my shade tree enjoyin the breeze an a smoke. I'm thinkin bout takin a nap just a restin from all my recent restin. Football watchin plum wore me out pizza pie pressin wore me to a frazzle. I'm thinkin bout takin a nap just a restin from all my recent restin. Sunday afternoon feels just like it should tuckered out, count a everyone's fussin an messin. I'm thinkin bout takin a nap just a restin from all my recent restin. It's been a spell since I broke a sweat if'n I stir it's generally to settle a bet. I'm thinkin bout takin a nap just a restin from all my recent restin. Lazy, old hound dog sleepin next to me wears me out just a pattin his head. I’m thinking bout taking a nap just a resting from all my recent restin. Done sent the ole lady to Ventriquist school just so as she’d have someone to talk to... Thinkin about taking that nap, now maybe in a bit, after I’ve rested a spell... (this is closer to the way the cd version sounds) bleeding... "Tis ink coming from his arm, Captain!" |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
Heck! This one plum wore me out!  Fun read here.To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I read the first verse then rested a bit.. read the second..then rested a bit..and so on..by the time I finished, I was tired!!!  Cute poem! |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very cute! Denise |
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Tramp Poet Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 754Could Be Anywhere... |
lol thanks for the imputs... yes this one is a favorite... close to home perhaps??? Would have answered sooner, but was taking a nap... |
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Tramp Poet Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 754Could Be Anywhere... |
lol thanks for the imputs... yes this one is a favorite... close to home perhaps??? Would have answered sooner, but was taking a nap... bleeding... "Tis ink coming from his arm, Captain!" |
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Tramp Poet Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 754Could Be Anywhere... |
lol thanks for the imputs... yes this one is a favorite... close to home perhaps??? Would have answered sooner, but was taking a nap... bleeding... "Tis ink coming from his arm, Captain!" |
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