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blackhalo Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 467Denver, CO |
A Tear A tear slips away Slowly falling, endlessly In it, my dreams Fading yet shining In a moment of glory Solitary yet unyeilding Filled by thoughts Memories & lies Desperatly clinging Fearing what's to come Expecting the worst, Yet hoping for the best A tear slipped away Fell to the end It held everything Shimmering, in a dark way Hiding and revealing every aspect Showering the world with love. To all that now live in the Pub, This was my first post, one that brought on so many wonderful friendships. Hoping that it will have the same power this time around. Alicia [This message has been edited by Alicia Renzelman (edited 10-23-2000).] |
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a_little_girl Member
since 2000-05-08
Posts 307San Alejandro, HI, USA |
This is amazing. I never thought that so much power could be held in a single tear...its moving. --Little Girl |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
I agree this is a very moving poem, and i remember when you joined Passions with it. Glad you brought it back for all to see, and I hope you gain many more friendships with it  |
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blackhalo Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 467Denver, CO |
Little Girl, I absolutely love to touch anyone with my poems. Thank you. Lost dreamer, It seems that all the people who found this poem the first time are gone. Thanks for sticking around! Alicia |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
My first read of it. Great. Filled by thoughts Memories & lies Desperatly clinging Fearing what's to come Expecting the worst, Yet hoping for the best says it all. |
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bestgirl911 Senior Member
since 2000-10-04
Posts 551Clio, MI , United We Stand |
So many different emotions can be held in one tear drop...and you expressed them well. Best |
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blackhalo Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 467Denver, CO |
Ron~ Thanks so much for the uplifting compliments. Best~ Isn't that always the poet's goal? I'm glad I can say I scored! :b Alicia A. Renzelman |
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