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Romy
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since 2000-05-28
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Plantation, Florida

0 posted 2000-10-30 01:29 PM



This morning,
Sam missed the bus,
and I stubbed my toe on a skateboard
laying near the stairs.
Maggie’s hair needed braiding,
the sink was full of dirty dishes,  
and Katie’s car was parked behind mine again.
I backed into the garbage can,
scattered garbage into the street,
and had to dig through the glove box to find
lunch money for Sam.
No parking spaces nearby, had to walk clear across school parking lot
hot and sweaty,
forgot to comb my hair
and the principal called me ma’am.
Back at home,
piles of dirty laundry,
and my mother called,
while I was up on a ladder washing
those horribly huge windows,
just wanted to talk.
This afternoon, Peter interrupted me no less than five times
while I was trying to write.  
Mom? Did you wash my blue shirt,
Our neighbor Cindy is here, Tessie’s on the phone-
something about a party tomorrow?
The lawn was covered with bicycles, scooters, baseball bats;
why does every child in the neighborhood
flock to my front step,
just as I'm hoping to take a quick nap?
The phone rang off the hook
while I was trying to cook dinner,
and I burnt the roast.
I finally got the kids tucked in
an hour past their usual bedtime
but the dog didn’t want to go out,
and Katie forgot to feed the cats,
even though I asked her twice,
so I did that before I turned out
all the lights.
Can’t anybody turn off a light around here?
And then when I finally fell into bed,
my husband was watching football on the TV.
He knows I can’t stand football.

Nothing left to do, but say my prayers
and end another day;
Dear God,
Thank-you for busy mornings,
noisy children, scattered toys, missed school-buses
beloved pets,
and the smell of fresh, shiny, young hair as I comb it.
Thank-you for another day to walk in the sun
on my two strong legs.  
Thank you for giving me two strong arms to clean
my glorious wall of windows,
while I gaze at  the sparrows
building their nest in the trees nearby.
And stacks of dirty dishes,
to remind me of the plentiful food that
satisfies my family’s hungry bellies.
Thank you for doorbells, phone calls from mom
and constant interruptions by my teen-age son,
who still wants to talk to me.
Thank you for the laughter of children at play,
drifting like music, from the large front yard.
And another evening,
to linger over one last bedtime story,
and hear soft I love you’s
as tiny hands stroke my cheek,
tired and content.
Thank-you for the chance to walk through
brightly lit rooms
at the end of the night,
and reflect on the joy and comfort
that each one holds inside.
And for my darling husband,
the football fanatic,
who always fills my car with gas,
never complains when I eat potato chips in bed,
and who still gazes at me with eyes
that say,  I’ll love you forever.





[This message has been edited by Debbie (edited 10-30-2000).]

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pegasus111
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since 2000-07-27
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ocala, fl, usa
1 posted 2000-10-30 02:03 PM


oh my!  what a truly wonderful insight into what real women go through every day. Inspirational, humerous, and just plain great!..bravo!

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost


bestgirl911
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since 2000-10-04
Posts 551
Clio, MI , United We Stand
2 posted 2000-10-30 02:22 PM


This was absolutely wonderful...I loved every line. It reminds me of my EVERY day. (except no husband..lol) Very heartwarming!

Best

kcsgrandma
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since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522
Presque Isle, ME
3 posted 2000-10-30 06:27 PM


This is great!  How true that we can view everything as either a burden or a blessing!  Thanks for the nice read and the lift it gave me.  

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn

Dennis L. White
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since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463
Michigan, U.S.A.
4 posted 2000-10-30 06:56 PM


Debbie,
  How blest you are, being surronded by loved ones and necessary chores that have shaped your life and given it meaning and purpose.  You are a wise woman to be able to give thanks for ALL the busy things which fill your life! Great read from start to finish!
Dennis :^)


Moonbeams radiate
When the veiling cloud has passed
Playful shadows dance

Dennis L. White :^)



Denise
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5 posted 2000-10-30 07:40 PM


This is fabulous, Debbie! We can look at life with 'complaining' eyes or a thankful heart! I love how you showed both options in this poem! Well written!

Denise

Poet deVine
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6 posted 2000-10-30 08:05 PM


OH..I like this!! VERY good Debbie.    
Romy
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Plantation, Florida
7 posted 2000-10-30 10:30 PM


Thank you all for your kind replies to my poem! It's really more prose than poetry, I suppose and looking over it a second time I found many errors. Forgive me for the less then perfect first draft, I guess I was just in a hurry today to get all those feelings written down!
I do have so much to be thankful for...it's all in the way we choose to look at life I guess!

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8 posted 2000-10-30 10:53 PM


Debbie~
Sounds like you've got a lot to be thankful for.
A slice of Americana ... but some forget to
remember to give thanks in prayer.
Thanks for sharing.
~*Marge*~


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BSC
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9 posted 2000-10-31 09:28 AM


Oh Yes, Yes, Yes Debbie!!!!  A beautiful write from beginning to end.  (Geez I just hate when they call me Ma'am)!  Bonnie
Romy
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Plantation, Florida
10 posted 2000-10-31 11:03 AM


Thanks Bonnie, I'm glad that you liked it!
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