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Broken_Winged_Angel Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 994Small Town, Somewhere 
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Sparkling in the morning dew Each drop a diamond so true Perhaps a tear fallen from above Shed by angels filled with love Velvetly petals glowing with red Reaching to unfold in the day ahead Elusive frangrances drifting with wind Reminders of all the places you've been Perched on a stem filled with thorns Growing from the ground so worn If in this harsh world it can survive Take from the rose, a lesson in life. With a little piece of tomorrow, You'll have to kiss yesterday goodbye. Because today won't last forever, And the past will only make you cry. |
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Broken_Winged_Angel Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 994Small Town, Somewhere |
 Everyone will have to figure out the lesson on their own..  |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
This is lovely!! The image of angels tears as dew is incredible!  |
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a_little_girl Member
since 2000-05-08
Posts 307San Alejandro, HI, USA |
I think the lesson is hardship. We all have to go through that experience sometime, weither we like it or not. This poem is a good representation of that lesson. Well done. --Little Girl |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
This is so lovely, Your use of a rose as an analogy of the beauty that we each can become if we but keep faith through the struggles of life, is stupendous! Ellie le coeur a ses raisons que la raison ne con-nait point....the heart has its reasons that reason knows nothing of.. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This is indeed a lovely lesson, even if we grow to be carnations... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Yes, beautiful images! Lovely! Denise |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
BWA, Beautiful poem & wisdom filled, take from the rose, a lesson in life. thank you. "Perched on a stem filled with thorns Growing from the ground so worn If in this harsh world it can survive Take from the rose, a lesson in life." |
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Broken_Winged_Angel Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 994Small Town, Somewhere |
Thankyou...I'm glad everyone enjoyed this one.. Most definitely one of the happier ones I've posted..Thanks for all your replies. |
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DawnG 
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
Great poem and great message. Dawn |
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Solstice Son Member
since 2000-09-19
Posts 469 |
 nicely done m'dear...you in every way I know... Sol |
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