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Broken_Winged_Angel
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since 2000-04-06
Posts 994
Small Town, Somewhere

0 posted 2000-10-25 05:45 AM


Answer me a question
I'll question your reply
It comes from living a life
Filled with too many lies

Call for me at midnight
I'll answer you by noon
You're declaring your love
All together way too soon

Order me around
I'll walk the other way
Not gonna play your games
Now or any other day

Give me room to move
I need to stretch and fly
Like a bird upon the wind
I'm floating away from you
......Goodbye.



With a little piece of tomorrow,
You'll have to kiss yesterday goodbye.
Because today won't last forever,
And the past will only make you cry.

© Copyright 2000 Angel - All Rights Reserved
blackhalo
Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 467
Denver, CO
1 posted 2000-10-25 12:12 PM


BWA,
I love the fact that you are able to walk away from him.  I admire your courage and only wish that I could find some of my own...
Alicia

pegasus111
Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219
ocala, fl, usa
2 posted 2000-10-25 06:21 PM


this hits much too close to home..well written.

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost

Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley
3 posted 2000-10-25 07:57 PM


Wow! You tell him like it is! I like this.  
bestgirl911
Senior Member
since 2000-10-04
Posts 551
Clio, MI , United We Stand
4 posted 2000-10-26 11:17 AM


Call for me at midnight
I'll answer you by noon...

I love that....
Good Job!

Best


[This message has been edited by bestgirl911 (edited 10-26-2000).]

DawnG
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Senior Member
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494
United States
5 posted 2000-10-26 04:30 PM


I too like this one a lot. Wish I had the guts you do..


                         Dawn

a_little_girl
Member
since 2000-05-08
Posts 307
San Alejandro, HI, USA
6 posted 2000-10-27 03:24 PM


Hmmm..."the opposite way" kind of poem so to speak. "the opposite way" is when someone wants you to do something, and you do the opposite.
--Little Girl
PS. Well done!  

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