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wordancer Senior Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 809VA 
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...tick can't sleep dark night emptiness sigh, turn, toss clock waits hands tremble wide-eyes see nothing slow weep taste tears can't sleep …doze startle! up/down down/up close window cold pane dark memories lost in reflection can't sleep distant time churning mind don't think rocking chair slow beat cat purrs no ease can't sleep waiting for… morning time waiting for… touch of time waiting for… end of time waiting for… ...tock Lady Noggins aka Wordancer ...come, dance with me...in my world of words... |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Oh my, can I relate to this poem, seems it's my every night. Great job describing the feeling.  |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
Beautifully and painfully done, Lady! What an eternity between tick and tock! To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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wordancer Senior Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 809VA |
Yeah, the long drawn out minutes of a dark, endless night...where seconds are a eternity. Thanks Lost Dreame and kcsgrandma -Lady |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
I know.... the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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DawnG 
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
Describes my night last night and even my day today. The silence is deafening.. Dawn |
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DawnG
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
Describes my night last night and even my day today. The silence is deafening.. Dawn |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very well written, Lady! Denise |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
I can relate, had one last night. Very good writing. Marcy |
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bestgirl911 Senior Member
since 2000-10-04
Posts 551Clio, MI , United We Stand |
what a accurate description of a lonely heart on a endless dark night. love it. Best |
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kid D Member
since 2000-10-18
Posts 64 |
this is great, i rarely don't sleep at night, so i am lucky, but on the rare times that i don't...you hit it perfect....great format...and i agree with kcsgrandma...the way you put it between the tick and the tock great work |
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