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dgvarner
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since 2000-05-13

Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

0 posted 2000-06-14 04:00 PM

love
is appealling--
addicting.
as it brushes past
i reach for it
with little thought
of consequence--
just missing...
i feel it in my bones--
having no where
to place it
it gnaws at me,
aching to find itself
entwined...
i daydream
of its presence
wishing it to come--
but love rarely comes by here,
and when it does
my friend, fear
pushes it out...

--dgvarner

"A Poet's life is on written page; a scenario to take the stage--watch..." dgvarner

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

1 posted 2000-06-14 09:33 PM

Very nice!

Denise

kelieth
Member

since 2000-06-12

Posts 314
Normal IL - USA

2 posted 2000-06-15 12:41 PM

Enjoyable. The tale is familiar. Hopefully we'll overcome.

Kevin

"Anything is possible with patience, time is the tool use it to reach your goals."

PhaerieChild
Senior Member

since 1999-08-30

Posts 1787
Aloha, Oregon

3 posted 2000-06-15 01:49 AM

fear pushes it out...how true but when fear is overcome love is wonderful. Here's to overcoming.

Poetry~ Words falling on paper, painting a dream.

Shawna R. Holder
Boise, Idaho

childomine
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since 2000-01-25

Posts 818
st. petersburg, FL

4 posted 2000-06-16 10:12 AM

Excellent dg. Fear keeps us from experiencing so many things.

vlraynes
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since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

5 posted 2000-10-23 03:34 PM

dg-
  WOW!!! you KNOW how much i can relate
  to this right now.
  it's almost as if this was
  written for me.
  love it!!

  HUGE HUGS,
   -tricks

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes

kcsgrandma
Senior Member

since 2000-09-24

Posts 1522
Presque Isle, ME

6 posted 2000-10-23 06:23 PM

It's scary, isn't it? But you don't get great joy without the risk of great pain. I think the risk is worth it.

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn

a_little_girl
Member

since 2000-05-08

Posts 307
San Alejandro, HI, USA

7 posted 2000-10-24 11:33 PM

This is some deep poetry, dgvarner. It kinda made me think on how some people can go without love in the world...*shudder*
--Little Girl
PS. Keep writing!!

Ron K. Fox
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since 2000-10-24

Posts 925

8 posted 2000-10-25 09:16 PM

I've been here two days and you amaze me. you're great. Ron

dgvarner
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since 2000-05-13

Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

9 posted 2000-10-27 09:53 AM

hey guys! thanks so much for all your wonderful responses..

i dont get a lot of time to always thank each of you personally... sorry

...but i really really appreciate each one of you reading me and leaving me such wonderful words!!!

big hugs, dg

"after a while, you learn the subtle difference between holding a hand and chaining a soul..." -V A Shoffstall

Alle'cram
Senior Member

since 2000-02-28

Posts 1816
Texas

10 posted 2000-10-27 09:56 AM

Well, just stopit! stopit! rite now..you made me feel, I'm taking it and here it comes back to ya...I love you! Marcy

bestgirl911
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since 2000-10-04

Posts 551
Clio, MI , United We Stand

11 posted 2000-10-27 10:24 AM

Dg....

Once more you hit it right on the nose...you have that way....nice job!

Best

dgvarner
Member Elite

since 2000-05-13

Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

12 posted 2000-10-27 04:30 PM

marcy..thanks for passin' the love around friend!

bestgirl..ouch! sometimes it hurts to get hit right on the nose...

thanks for reading me

hugs, dg

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