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Broken_Winged_Angel Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 994Small Town, Somewhere 
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There goes that song again Playing softly off the radio Still, I wouldn't change a thing If anyone had let me know How much pain you'd cause me. For a moment I find myself Slipping back into the past Sounds of a carnival and laughter Love shining so bright it'd last Forever, least that's what I thought. Now, the beds cold, I'm alone And you've moved on to someone new The flashing rides drop away Bittersweet tears fall because of you And still, further back I go. Stars shone brightly our first date Two weeks later a soft kiss Your voice whispering you'd be The answer to my every wish And niave, I believed your lies. It was all getting better Till the night you left our bed And prepared to go to another More what you did, not said That's when the end began. The song fades away slowly The last strains of guitar Call out achingly Echoing notes play on my broken heart Like our love, the song dies out. With a little piece of tomorrow, You'll have to kiss yesterday goodbye. Because today won't last forever, And the past will only make you cry. |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
First CONGRATS on 500.........lets have another 500 Love can be so cruel.....but realising is the first step in healing....nicely written  JON |
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Honey Bunch Member
since 2000-08-08
Posts 99South Africa |
Congratulations on reaching 500!! I equate love to seasons - remember the summer as it will warm you in winter but the "love song" never dies. Helen |
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Solstice Son Member
since 2000-09-19
Posts 469 |
*HUGE SMOOOCHES* for the 500 posts hun ...and if there really was a moron that did the stuff you wrote...well...you're better off without him...really... as I have told one friend I will tell you ... " anyone with a soul loves you " love you hun sol |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Congratulations, BWA, on 500!! Way to go!! You are definitely better off without somebody like that, for sure. It does hurt, though, for a time. Denise |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
The song of the guitar may "FADE" out but the memory of it's beauty should never die...would be a sad thing if all the songs of our lives just simply died. Wonderful writing and CONGRATS on your 500th. |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
That's a big milestone! Congratulations. I like the analogy of the music and the love fading out. Hope next time the song plays on and on. To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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Broken_Winged_Angel Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 994Small Town, Somewhere |
Jon, Thankyou..and I'm working on the next 500 Honey Bunch - Thats a lovely way to look at love. Sol -  There was a moron who did that.. My ex-fiance.. Oh well...better before the marriage then after, right?Denise - I think so too...I'm working on finding a much better man.Mark - Thankyou...and I'll keep the fading out instead of dying in mind for next time..  kcsgrandma - Cheers to that |
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Romy Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1170Plantation, Florida |
Congratulations on your 500th post and on yet another beautiful, heartfelt poem! |
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gofor42 Member
since 2000-01-23
Posts 143Arkansas |
I am most impressed, both with the heart-felt pain in this piece and the fact that you've posted 500. Congrats on that. Just remember that morons are everywhere in this world, and it's the duty of those of us who aren't to try and show them the error of their ways. "If you can't annoy somebody, there's little point in writing." --Kingsley Amis |
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