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Lost Dreamer
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since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464
Somewhere near the Rainbow

0 posted 2000-10-18 07:17 PM


Every Moment of You

Lucid sprinkles of peace and tranquility,
transcend beyond your being caressingly.
My treasure net has been rewarded by you,
never empty, always full, dressed up like new.

Satin smooth inspirations slipping me away,
every moment of you is lovingly displayed.
Simplistic, sweet maneuvers sketched lightly,
always brilliant, never dull, dressed up brightly.

Twinkling spindles reflecting destinations glow,
together with you shimmering delight will show.
Spellbound illusions dancing through reality,
never sorry, always smiling, dressed in vitality.

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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

1 posted 2000-10-18 09:10 PM


This is absolutely beautiful, Gloria! Very lovely!

Denise

Broken_Winged_Angel
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since 2000-04-06
Posts 994
Small Town, Somewhere
2 posted 2000-10-19 04:35 AM


Oh wow.. This is beautiful.  
ellie LeJeune
Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA
3 posted 2000-10-19 06:18 AM


Poetic perfection! Romantically wondrous! Ellie

Summers haunting melody
that awakens
the butterflies,
calling them to join
the dance
in their silent song
of praise to God.

eL

Jon Mewett
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since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304

4 posted 2000-10-19 09:22 AM


Poetic and wonderful Dreamer....nice

Jon

bestgirl911
Senior Member
since 2000-10-04
Posts 551
Clio, MI , United We Stand
5 posted 2000-10-19 09:29 AM


"Satin smooth inspirations slipping me away..."


That is just beautiful.....

Best

Dennis L. White
Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463
Michigan, U.S.A.
6 posted 2000-10-21 10:54 AM


Lost Dreamer,
  This is romantic in a surreal, dreamy sort of way. Images float on a wispy sweet mist. Delightful imagery!
Dennis :^)

Moonbeams radiate
When the veiling cloud has passed
Playful shadows dance

Dennis L. White :^)



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