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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869
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The lullaby, of the ocean calmly sooths, the cradled night while shadows linger, with emotion and passion, continues to ignite as moonlight, becomes a potion the dancing body, of the waves excite the salty fragrance, in the air seduces lovers, unaware A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautiful, Victoria! Just lovely! Denise |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Victoria, Beautiful, sensual lyrics, to the beating rythum of the surf and waves. Great imagery here. Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has passed Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
I can smell the sea in this one and is indeed very beauiful, like the sea  Sometimes you have to let go and move on, But never let go of the memories. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you Dennis and Maria...so nice of you to peek in today..living in north Texas i dont get to see the surf like i did when i lived in Hawaii, but i still remember it well..and miss it.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
This is lovely, Victoria, perhaps my favorite of those I've read of yours. The ocean can indeed be very seductive. To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Well i am glad you enjoyed kcsgrandma..thank you for visiting today.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Hi Denise..i know i said thank you earlier but at least i thought i did haa..but thank you again for reading.. appreciate your nice comments.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
Sensual in a salty sought of way Victoria........I have a passion for the sea. Jon |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you jon..something about the ocean..just makes you glad to be alive..when you are near.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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