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Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

0 posted 2000-10-14 10:01 PM

when moonlight is tinted with teardrops
and teardrops fill goblets meant for wine
bathe in the salt..drink of lifes malt
order a double of lifes moonshine
paint the salt on the rim forget about him
get drunk on the rocks and add lime

when long stem red roses burn to ashes
and smoke lingers within the thorns
inhale the fragrance, the remembrance
velvet roses will again be reborn
in the vase of love.. the fate of lifes glove
a teardrop in the smoke may linger on...

A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

1 posted 2000-10-14 10:38 PM

This is lovely, just lovely,

Kathleen

kcsgrandma
Senior Member

since 2000-09-24

Posts 1522
Presque Isle, ME

2 posted 2000-10-14 11:30 PM

Cheers, Victoria! A toast to better luck next time!

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn

Moon Dust

Member Elite

since 1999-06-11

Posts 2177
Skelmersdale, UK

3 posted 2000-10-15 01:26 PM

You can make beauiful poems out of any emotion, love this one esspecially

Sometimes you have to let go and move on,
But never let go of the memories.

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

4 posted 2000-10-15 06:34 PM

thank you,irish rose, kcsgrandmom, and maria
im happy you enjoyed ..toasting to you all haa..

~Victoria~

A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)

Broken_Winged_Angel
Senior Member

since 2000-04-06

Posts 994
Small Town, Somewhere

5 posted 2000-10-16 07:55 AM

Cheers to you, too... I just spent a weekend like this..

With a little piece of tomorrow,
You'll have to kiss yesterday goodbye.
Because today won't last forever,
And the past will only make you cry.

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

6 posted 2000-10-16 11:58 AM

thank you for visiting and im sorry you can relate to this one..cheers in the future.

~Victoria~

A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)

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