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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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 Ablaze~*Marge Tindal*~ Tangerine orb intensely afire Blaze of light streaks right on by Sparkling, as it collides with other worlds of cosmic memory  Man, talk about seeing stars !Whew ! Of the shooting kind !~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Hi Marge- glad to see you back at the pub.  this is great! i love it. i alway enjoy your use of colors in your poetry. love ya, -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Spectacular!! Well done, Marge!! Denise |
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BSC
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Ahhhh Marge, Those shooting stars!!!!! I do believe they are flung from a little one's slingshot....but, that's another poem. This is wonderful. Bonnie |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
Just made a wish.........yeeeeeeeee It came true  Jon |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Vicky~ I enjoy knowing that you enjoy it. Denise~ I'm star-struck ! Bonnie~ Do I detect little angels would actually use slingshots ??? JonM~ Yahooooo ! That's just what should happen when you make a wish ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Richard Brooks Junior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 17Richardson, TX |
Marge, An interesting verse. I see flashes of memories in your universe. Richard |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Richard~ Thank you for the reply and apologies for the delay in responding. Got a little lost in the shuffle. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
I almost missed this one Marge..loved it..very creative.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Marge, Once again you have brightened my day with your beautiful verse. You are a Star in my eyes and you sure aren't shooting or fading! Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has passed Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
So this is where you been hanging out at. Lovely verse my friend. Loved the collision most of all but I have always like the sparks you create now haven't I? |
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Broken_Winged_Angel Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 994Small Town, Somewhere |
Star light, star bright, First star I see tonight I wish I may, I wish I might Have this wish I wish tonight.... *applauds* Very good..  With a little piece of tomorrow, You'll have to kiss yesterday goodbye. Because today won't last forever, And the past will only make you cry. |
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