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Songbird
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0 posted 2000-10-13 09:49 PM


Golden memories
Frame the edges of moments
That mattered the most

© Copyright 2000 Marcia Estep - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 2000-10-13 09:53 PM


Oh, this is perfect, Septsong!

Denise

ellie LeJeune
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2 posted 2000-10-13 10:20 PM


Positively perfect! Dear friend, love, Ellie
Temptress
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3 posted 2000-10-13 10:36 PM


Beautiful!  

kcsgrandma
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4 posted 2000-10-13 11:06 PM


It looks as if we're going to run out of superlative on this one.  It really is wonderful!

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn

Romy
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5 posted 2000-10-13 11:34 PM


very nicely done!
kaile
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6 posted 2000-10-14 01:38 PM


ditto the rest...very good thought
Dennis L. White
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7 posted 2000-10-14 08:14 PM


Septsong,
  I like this but is it a haiku or a senryu?
Either way it is delightful!
Dennis :^)

Moonbeams radiate
When the veiling cloud has passed
Playful shadows dance

Dennis L. White :^)



Dennis L. White
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8 posted 2000-10-14 08:14 PM


OOOPS, I must have stuttered, sorry, LOL
Dennis L. White :^)




[This message has been edited by Dennis L. White (edited 10-15-2000).]

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9 posted 2000-10-14 08:46 PM


Memories are like photos arent they, and this one's lovely

Sometimes you have to let go and move on,
But never let go of the memories.


Songbird
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10 posted 2000-10-14 11:27 PM


Glad you enjoyed it everyone and Dennis maybe it is a senryu, I'm not sure, was wondering about that. If it is it was an accident..that fell out of my head. LOL

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