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Romy Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1170Plantation, Florida |
Fierce dark clouds gather there are rumbles of attack against the blue sky |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very good, Debbie! I've got my umbrella handy! Denise |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
 This is an unprovoked attack, I'm sure. Very nice imagery.To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
Nice one debbie maybe you can write one about how the blue sky plans to counterattack |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Debbie, Your few well chosen words display a vivid picture here, good one! Dennis :^)< !signature--> Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has passed Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) [This message has been edited by Dennis L. White (edited 10-14-2000).] |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
i wish we would get some rain here in Texas..we need it bad..nice haiku indeed. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Romy Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1170Plantation, Florida |
Thanks to everybody who replied to my haiku! Kaile, I thought a counter attack sounded like a good idea, so here's my attempt! The sun shoots its beams evaporating the clouds before they do harm. The war is over and the day is saved! |
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