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ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA

0 posted 2000-10-13 02:42 AM


How can friends so far,
Dear ones that I've never met,
have entered my heart?


Summers haunting melody
that awakens
the butterflies,
calling them to join
the dance
in their silent song
of praise to God.

eL

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Jon Mewett
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since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304

1 posted 2000-10-13 05:04 AM


This is nice Ellie.......friendship can take on many guises........you write this well.




Jon

Alle'cram
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since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816
Texas
2 posted 2000-10-13 10:12 AM


Wonderful job conveying "feelings"!...and allow me to say, it is the loving heart "you" have, that others can enter. Marcy

kcsgrandma
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since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522
Presque Isle, ME
3 posted 2000-10-13 07:00 PM


This is lovely, Ellie, and a very good question, too, but they do enter, don't they?

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn

kaile
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since 2000-02-06
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singapore
4 posted 2000-10-14 01:22 PM


have often wondered the very same thing myself...nicely done
Dennis L. White
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since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463
Michigan, U.S.A.
5 posted 2000-10-14 08:21 PM


Ellie,
  Your brothers, your friends are very blessed indeed to have a friend like you!
Peace unto you my Sister,
Dennis :^)

Moonbeams radiate
When the veiling cloud has passed
Playful shadows dance

Dennis L. White :^)



2dalimit
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since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228
Mississippi coast
6 posted 2000-10-15 08:24 AM


Thanks. I consider myself your far off friend.
Melton

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